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[sid] => 54111
[catid] => 1
[aid] => mick
[title] => Don't smoke pot
[time] => 2004-06-29 07:02:48
[hometext] => People playing wiht pot, thinking they won't get caught, but when they do it's not so hot, all because they smoked pot.
[bodytext] => All your life you threw away
just to go get high that day
Now your in a dream
barley in a daze
The sound of a gunshot is just a haze
There's red blood all around
Everyone staring at you with out a sound
All you see are flashing lights
And your still not sure what went down that night
Then her comes a man you've never seen
holding needles and other things
You hear your mom and all her tears.
"mom please don't cry my dear, momma where am I at
Please get my coat and my hat
of the rack
so i don't have to come back."
Then you hear the doctor say
"he won't live it's better this way"
See this might happen and this might not, but the moral is
DON'T SMOKE POT!!!!!!
[comments] => 11
[counter] => 303
[topic] => 66
[informant] => Tonilovesadam
[notes] =>
[ihome] => 0
[alanguage] => english
[acomm] => 0
[haspoll] => 0
[pollID] => 0
[score] => 14
[ratings] => 5
[editpoem] => 1
[associated] =>
[topicname] => drugabuse
)
Don't smoke pot
Contributed by
Tonilovesadam
on
Tuesday, 29th June 2004 @ 07:02:48 AM in AEST
Topic:
drugabuse
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All your life you threw away
just to go get high that day
Now your in a dream
barley in a daze
The sound of a gunshot is just a haze
There's red blood all around
Everyone staring at you with out a sound
All you see are flashing lights
And your still not sure what went down that night
Then her comes a man you've never seen
holding needles and other things
You hear your mom and all her tears.
"mom please don't cry my dear, momma where am I at
Please get my coat and my hat
of the rack
so i don't have to come back."
Then you hear the doctor say
"he won't live it's better this way"
See this might happen and this might not, but the moral is
DON'T SMOKE POT!!!!!!
Copyright ©
Tonilovesadam
... [
2004-06-29 07:02:48]
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Re: Don't smoke pot
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by deathdrop on
Tuesday, 29th June 2004 @ 07:47:08 AM AEST
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| t's very catchy with a powerful message, but you have to have taken other drugs to die right? pot doesn't kill people does it?? |
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Re: Don't smoke pot
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 29th June 2004 @ 08:36:55 AM AEST
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'See this might happen and this might not, but the moral is . . .'
What?
Your moral may have been better served targeting guns & ammo, rather than weed, as not everyone who smokes pot, I imagine, gets blasted in the gut with a sawn-off shotgun every time they go for a hit.
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Re: Don't smoke pot
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by krisseee on
Tuesday, 29th June 2004 @ 08:40:57 AM AEST
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i cant believe this poem has been written.
americans take weed so seriously sometimes, come on, theres nothing wrong with the stuff whatsoever.
weed is good
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Re: Don't smoke pot
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by Broken_Skin on
Tuesday, 29th June 2004 @ 08:55:03 AM AEST
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I agree with Krisee,
theres nothing wrong with weed,
i tell you if Bush, Blair, Laden and Hitler
smoked weed, this world would be a better
place.
Drink is alot worse, and thats legal.
The drugs that are problems are
Ecstasy
Heroin
Acid
Crack
and Cocaine
Weed is sugar compaired to those drugs..
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Re: Don't smoke pot
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by Broken_Skin on
Tuesday, 29th June 2004 @ 08:56:21 AM AEST
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and oh yeah
this wasnt a good poem
not just because of the content..
It just didnt make sense, and was very messy
1/5 |
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Re: Don't smoke pot
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 29th June 2004 @ 10:40:19 AM AEST
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well, unless its laced with something else and your in a really horrid violent ghetto or riot i think this poem is Highly exagerated, nonetheless, great message to stay off drugs, however, from the sound of the place in this poem, if the person did get high i would have to say they may have enjoyed the circumstances a bit more lol, weird to say the least, keep writing, hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Don't smoke pot
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by freespirit on
Tuesday, 29th June 2004 @ 10:58:43 AM AEST
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Great job
I hear you on this one all you dope heads out there think your smart but maybe you should read up on pot the brain is made up of water pot has oil they dont mix the oil stays.in the brain and can distroy your memory
before you light up you next joint use what little brain you have left
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Re: Don't smoke pot
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by kailadragon on
Tuesday, 29th June 2004 @ 02:41:49 PM AEST
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| love the poem girl!!!! but I agree with Broken_skin, if the world leaders smoked weed, we'd all be hippys and the world would finally be peaceful |
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Re: Don't smoke pot
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 29th June 2004 @ 04:01:37 PM AEST
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I believe the moral should have been stronger on anti violence than anti marijuana.. I am not certain you can make the case that smoking pot will create any type of violent behavior actually - but I hear what you are saying about being anti-drugs in general, not much good comes out of it.
At least you got a good deal of people thinking and talking! |
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Re: Don't smoke pot
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by wakegurl77 on
Friday, 2nd July 2004 @ 11:24:00 AM AEST
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i agree with both sides in a way like weed isnt that bad ok like if u want to be anti something pick a more powerful drug weed just calms people ok its only harmful to kids neway when ur older it has less of an effect on your brian i know plenty of buseness men that do pot and they are in their forties and i bet you any money that alot of the political leaders have done pot they just arent high all the time if you know what i mean but if this poem was say about cocanine or herione i would love it so please target a more harmful drug next time
allways sincere
Wakegurl |
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Re: Don't smoke pot
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by shorty_52 on
Wednesday, 1st September 2004 @ 06:50:34 PM AEST
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this has a very powerful message. i'll think twise b4 i smoke again.
thanx
~ally~ |
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