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[aid] => mick
[title] => my knight
[time] => 2004-06-27 14:06:52
[hometext] => i wanted to write a poem for jeff (TheLastStringCut).. but i cant write love poems.. so i kinda made it a morbid love poem.. meh it turned out alright.. tell me what u think..
[bodytext] => im trapped in a castle called life, kept inside, held captive waiting for my prince to rescue me the strong walls keep me locked deep in the dungeon, suffocating me, wont let me be free i lay in my room screaming out for soemeone to help me, wishing someone will hear my cry chrimson red tears pour out of my eyes as i drown in a pool of my blood thats dry everyday is the same as the last, dying inside, struggling to keep myself alive my attempts are pathetic as i search everywhere for an escape out of this life a knight comes to my door giving me hope telling me hes gonna set me free, let me out finally the door is opened and the room is no longer my home as im allowed to walk about racing to the gates im eager to leave this castle to see the rest of the world he holds me back, tells me i must not go farther, im struck down with a knife hes hurled my attempts to escape land me a beating as he brings me down and breaks my heart thrown into a dungeon smaller than the previous left to suffer as i fall apart painful thoughts consume my mind as i realize that there is no reason for me to live in this pathetic room i call my life i have no purpose that i give paralyzed with depression i lack energy to attempt at plotting out my escape nothing matters to me anymore taking the knife at my body i begin to scrape blood pours out and floods my room my body lays there covered on the floor the life is draing out of me when suddenly theres a loud tap on the door the most beautiful voice ive ever heard flows out freely into the air it brings me such happines that i regret thoughts of suicide how could i dare the door unlocks, the knob turns, and the door flys back swiftly in my direction my eyes are stunned standing before me is the greatest piece of perfection i dare not blink for the presence may be a mirage and i dont want it to vanish he walked into my life and unlcoked my door it was anyones ultimate wish slowly he walked over to where i lay and extended his hand and grasped mine calmly he raised it to his mouth and kissed it sweetly, his lips so divine instantly the strong secure walls of the castle crumbled to the ground at that instant i knew that my love, my knight in shining armor had been found [comments] => 4 [counter] => 172 [topic] => 2 [informant] => deadbloodyrose [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 13 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )
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