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Array ( [sid] => 5369 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => The painfully fake friend [time] => 2002-10-21 15:00:00 [hometext] => a poem about my friend who always like to stab me in the back [bodytext] => I showed trueness I was never fake,
you showed our friendship was a mistake
Your eyes were so evil your heart so cold,
yet I stuck it out I stayed bold
You treated me like dirt in front of our friends,
not realizin just how much pain that sends
Thinkin it was funny to see me get mad,
but what will happen when your all alone and sad
Youll want my shoulder to lay your tears upon,
but who knows maybe i'll wise up and be gone
All my life i have suffered from your pain,
but yet I always made sure you stayed sane
Then came the time in my life i needed you the most,
and once again you turned your back and let my heart roast
I finally give up you hurt me for the last time,
you ever need me it better be some serious crime
You knew what was happening and how much fear i held inside,
but you acted like a liitle girl and went to run and hide
You are selfish,spoiled and ungrateful,
and because of that no man will stay faithful
Plus the fact you think you got it all,
well honey your a** is about to fall
Play your game of lies and misbelief,
cuz your lifes going to be nothin but grief
Im just glad im not in it I was finally smart,
to walk away from you before you completley destroyed my heart.............

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The painfully fake friend

Contributed by Justice3310 on Monday, 21st October 2002 @ 03:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry



I showed trueness I was never fake,
you showed our friendship was a mistake
Your eyes were so evil your heart so cold,
yet I stuck it out I stayed bold
You treated me like dirt in front of our friends,
not realizin just how much pain that sends
Thinkin it was funny to see me get mad,
but what will happen when your all alone and sad
Youll want my shoulder to lay your tears upon,
but who knows maybe i'll wise up and be gone
All my life i have suffered from your pain,
but yet I always made sure you stayed sane
Then came the time in my life i needed you the most,
and once again you turned your back and let my heart roast
I finally give up you hurt me for the last time,
you ever need me it better be some serious crime
You knew what was happening and how much fear i held inside,
but you acted like a liitle girl and went to run and hide
You are selfish,spoiled and ungrateful,
and because of that no man will stay faithful
Plus the fact you think you got it all,
well honey your a** is about to fall
Play your game of lies and misbelief,
cuz your lifes going to be nothin but grief
Im just glad im not in it I was finally smart,
to walk away from you before you completley destroyed my heart.............





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Re: The painfully fake friend (User Rating: 1 )
by LOWMAN613 on Tuesday, 22nd October 2002 @ 01:08:59 AM AEST
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Wow! Thats some write! I had a friend like that once,so I know where your coming from! Christina


Re: The painfully fake friend (User Rating: 1 )
by uniquepoet33 on Tuesday, 22nd October 2002 @ 07:30:21 AM AEST
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actually that person was never your friend
been there and understand, i was told ever negative person u lose you will receive atleast 2 positive friends ...just remember to continue to keep it real


Re: The painfully fake friend (User Rating: 1 )
by Angel12881 on Tuesday, 22nd October 2002 @ 12:26:13 PM AEST
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Oh wow, that was really good. I can definitly related to were you're coming from. Nice job.


Re: The painfully fake friend (User Rating: 1 )
by mandy091706187 on Tuesday, 31st December 2002 @ 12:58:47 PM AEST
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Great great GREAT write... I've had "friends" like that too...
I know where you are comming from in that poem... Sadly, I think I still might have a few of these "friends"...

-Mandy




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