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Array ( [sid] => 5358 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => When Love Ends [time] => 2002-10-21 08:45:00 [hometext] => "This is sometimes what we go through after the love has gone." [bodytext] => I lay in the impression your body once made
in my bed and wonder how long the pillow
where you slept will remain warm. The volume of beautiful choices diminishes as I
realize I must now visit where our passions tower has fallen.

The silence only makes me hear you more as the dark weight of the hours drag behind
me. I must remember that inside the fallen
fruit the seed is not dead, as I realize what
used to be with, is now without.

Our bed burns of love no more as I wonder
with a jealous eye who will be tasting that
rich body of yours now. When will your
silhouette disappear from my vacant heart
as I seek to find out how long I will remain
a hope junkie.

The slam of the door doesn't abate my hunger for you while I've found my begging letter seems not to work. I no longer have any place to keep my memories as our mementos fall to the ground like autumn leaves.

For me living becomes a stranger as I cling to remembering what day it used to be. Every room I walk into is vacant as I desperately try to save myself from daggers drawn, quick to show my breathes revenge.

For now I must relinquish my soul, clear to see that when you left you administered the lash and I ended up "eating the bitter bread of banishment." [comments] => 5 [counter] => 230 [topic] => 22 [informant] => OysterMoon [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )
When Love Ends

Contributed by OysterMoon on Monday, 21st October 2002 @ 08:45:00 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove



I lay in the impression your body once made
in my bed and wonder how long the pillow
where you slept will remain warm. The volume of beautiful choices diminishes as I
realize I must now visit where our passions tower has fallen.

The silence only makes me hear you more as the dark weight of the hours drag behind
me. I must remember that inside the fallen
fruit the seed is not dead, as I realize what
used to be with, is now without.

Our bed burns of love no more as I wonder
with a jealous eye who will be tasting that
rich body of yours now. When will your
silhouette disappear from my vacant heart
as I seek to find out how long I will remain
a hope junkie.

The slam of the door doesn't abate my hunger for you while I've found my begging letter seems not to work. I no longer have any place to keep my memories as our mementos fall to the ground like autumn leaves.

For me living becomes a stranger as I cling to remembering what day it used to be. Every room I walk into is vacant as I desperately try to save myself from daggers drawn, quick to show my breathes revenge.

For now I must relinquish my soul, clear to see that when you left you administered the lash and I ended up "eating the bitter bread of banishment."




Copyright © OysterMoon ... [ 2002-10-21 08:45:00]
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Re: When Love Ends (User Rating: 1 )
by Daniela_Maria_Violin on Monday, 21st October 2002 @ 10:51:08 AM AEST
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Wow... this is deep!! Great Write OysterMoon!
(that's such a cool pen name!)

Daniela


Re: When Love Ends (User Rating: 1 )
by viola on Monday, 21st October 2002 @ 01:22:40 PM AEST
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this is so good. it has so many emotions in it.


Re: When Love Ends (User Rating: 1 )
by Lia on Monday, 21st October 2002 @ 01:53:14 PM AEST
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I must say that while reading this...my heart and mind was transported to a time when I felt love had left my life. It brought tears to my eyes as I remembered the emptiness I had felt inside. This is a magnificent poem...


Re: When Love Ends (User Rating: 1 )
by norticus on Tuesday, 22nd October 2002 @ 04:11:08 AM AEST
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I liked it. This poem really paints a true picture. I give it a 4.31 on the Nortiscale.


Re: When Love Ends (User Rating: 1 )
by OysterMoon on Tuesday, 22nd October 2002 @ 05:12:55 AM AEST
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Thank you for the compliment.
blessings,
oyster moon




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