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It's like a hot knife through my heart.
If she was here, you'd be with her,
And we would be apart.

I only wish I could fulfill
The love you see in her.
For i would die to be with you,
ALONE, within your stare.

you cannot help the way you feel,
But do not try to lie,
For I see that I am number two,
The SECOND star in your sky.

I'm hurting here, I ache inside
With the need for love returned,
But when we are close, i know she's there,
And i feel my insides burn.

I love you more than life itself,
But I can hate you just as much,
Just tell me that you love me true,
Or heed this final touch.

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Contributed by Katie-Kate on Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 04:05:17 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

Each time I hear you say her name,
It's like a hot knife through my heart.
If she was here, you'd be with her,
And we would be apart.

I only wish I could fulfill
The love you see in her.
For i would die to be with you,
ALONE, within your stare.

you cannot help the way you feel,
But do not try to lie,
For I see that I am number two,
The SECOND star in your sky.

I'm hurting here, I ache inside
With the need for love returned,
But when we are close, i know she's there,
And i feel my insides burn.

I love you more than life itself,
But I can hate you just as much,
Just tell me that you love me true,
Or heed this final touch.

Copyright © Katie-Kate ... [ 2004-06-23 04:05:17]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: ........ (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 04:26:25 AM AEST
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Wow girl, this is some strong, tuff, moving, sad, tender,emotional, unselfish luv, as u bear your heart. I known these feelings before so I can relate.
Good work and I give u five stars and hope things turn out the way they are suppose too.
luv ya girl,
huggs too,
emy

Re: ........ (User Rating: 1 )
by Gigi752004 on Tuesday, 27th July 2004 @ 11:43:42 PM AEST
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Very deep emotional feelings come through in this poem. I think it is great. Good Luck in all your future endeavors.

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