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Array ( [sid] => 53263 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => If Only The Knew [time] => 2004-06-22 22:13:25 [hometext] => self explaintory....please read and comment... thank you [bodytext] => If Only They Knew They moan at me for laughing
They mock me when I cry
If I'm showing no emotion
They say they want me to die

If only they knew my pain
They might not be so mean
Inside I'm hurting so, so much
If only it could be seen

Most nights I feel numb
The pain has become so bad
That I can feel it no longer
This life sucks; I think I'm mad

The life I wish I have
Is the life they think I've got
They don't know my life
I act happy, but really I'm not

I'm so different from them
They look no further than the surface
I feel so lonely, scared and sad
I don't wanna die, but you dont understand

I cant go on...my life is to bad
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If Only The Knew

Contributed by Living_In_My_Dream on Tuesday, 22nd June 2004 @ 10:13:25 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

If Only They Knew They moan at me for laughing
They mock me when I cry
If I'm showing no emotion
They say they want me to die

If only they knew my pain
They might not be so mean
Inside I'm hurting so, so much
If only it could be seen

Most nights I feel numb
The pain has become so bad
That I can feel it no longer
This life sucks; I think I'm mad

The life I wish I have
Is the life they think I've got
They don't know my life
I act happy, but really I'm not

I'm so different from them
They look no further than the surface
I feel so lonely, scared and sad
I don't wanna die, but you dont understand

I cant go on...my life is to bad

Copyright © Living_In_My_Dream ... [ 2004-06-22 22:13:25]
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Re: If Only The Knew (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Tuesday, 22nd June 2004 @ 10:36:28 PM AEST
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i can understand where you are coming from in some of this. people only look and believe things they are afraid or want to believe.

Re: If Only The Knew (User Rating: 1 )
by holderofthestone on Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 05:03:55 PM AEST
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you+ me = same story.... we relate to much and way too often... this is an excellent piece. but like you told me keep you head held high. they will get whats coming to them... A++++

Re: If Only The Knew (User Rating: 1 )
by Luinil on Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 05:50:32 PM AEST
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really good description of what you're feeling... hang in there, i know what you're feelin' too*

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