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Array ( [sid] => 53209 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Holy War(Pt. 2) [time] => 2004-06-22 17:10:12 [hometext] => This is part two of my three part song series.... click on my user name to see my other song. Please post. [bodytext] => They want war, they get war!

The Evil fleet,
We will defeat,
The Dark Winged Angels!
Do not bite at me,
Only pain will you see,
You aren't my angels!
Test Humans for
Right to Choose,
Don't wait with me,
You'll see who will lose...

Chorus:
I! Arch-Micheal!
I, Lead the fight!
I! Do follow!
I Finish the Fight!

HOLY WAR!
Watch out!
Oh GOD!
No doubt!
Someone stop this now!
Enemies they have become!
No one knew this is how!
The holy war is now WON!!!!

CHORUS

The fall has begun,
The War has been won,
Angel versus angel,
Standing true-good Angel.
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Holy War(Pt. 2)

Contributed by DerPinguin44 on Tuesday, 22nd June 2004 @ 05:10:12 PM in AEST
Topic: SongLyrics

They want war, they get war!

The Evil fleet,
We will defeat,
The Dark Winged Angels!
Do not bite at me,
Only pain will you see,
You aren't my angels!
Test Humans for
Right to Choose,
Don't wait with me,
You'll see who will lose...

Chorus:
I! Arch-Micheal!
I, Lead the fight!
I! Do follow!
I Finish the Fight!

HOLY WAR!
Watch out!
Oh GOD!
No doubt!
Someone stop this now!
Enemies they have become!
No one knew this is how!
The holy war is now WON!!!!

CHORUS

The fall has begun,
The War has been won,
Angel versus angel,
Standing true-good Angel.

Copyright © DerPinguin44 ... [ 2004-06-22 17:10:12]
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Re: Holy War(Pt. 2) (User Rating: 1 )
by Ethereal_Engine on Saturday, 3rd July 2004 @ 09:59:34 PM AEST
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I have never actually read the bible, but I learn things through movies, anime, and manga. The manga (japanese comic books) Priest deals with angels opposed to god. They want to make men into mindless undead killing machines who go against everything that god stands for. The angels are angry becuase god gave man the right to chose how to live while the angels were bound to follow gods will and could never chose what to do with their lives. I dont know anything about the actual biblical account of Lucifer waging war against god. I'm curious what type of music these lyrics go with. You have a good flow into this from part by having those last two verses the same as in part 1.

Re: Holy War(Pt. 2) (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Saturday, 10th July 2004 @ 08:10:14 AM AEST
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Interesting write

Re: Holy War(Pt. 2) (User Rating: 1 )
by mdmorash on Saturday, 7th August 2004 @ 02:43:25 PM AEST
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Very nice...again...I must read on.

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