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Array ( [sid] => 53022 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => numb [time] => 2004-06-21 14:37:07 [hometext] => [bodytext] => there is so much ***** going on in my life
so many things that should be making me cry
for some reason im not, for some reason im not in pain
i've lost my feelings, i feel no sorrow
i love no one, trust no one, find happiness nowhere
today is strange, im calm and emotionless
i dont smile, but yet i dont cry, im blank
the painful words slip right by without me noticing
yesterday i would be depressed from your words
today i shrug and barely notice they're said
everyone tells me they love me but how can i love back
if you're emotionless you dont love, which i dont
i dont say it back and they get mad but i dont care
i dont care if you want me back cuz i dont love you
i cant love you, i dont know how i could
ive been stabbed in the back for the last time
cuz now no one will get to reach my backside from where they stand
everyone will be at a distance to enusre my safety
no more tears will be shed no more joyful laughs
now ill live a meaningless and emotionless life
a life without you, without everyone, without pain
i dont even care anymore if i live with my father
as long as i cant feel, as long as im away from you
you gave me false happiness but i returned it today
you can have your *****ty present back
you're no more of a person now than you ever were before
you're better of without me
im better off without you and your pain your non-existing love
this is the final goodbye to you and i dont care if you cry
you've left me numb so your sobs wont pierce my heart
your smile cant bring me happiness
go on live your life and forget all about me [comments] => 3 [counter] => 179 [topic] => 48 [informant] => deadbloodyrose [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )
numb

Contributed by deadbloodyrose on Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 02:37:07 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



there is so much ***** going on in my life
so many things that should be making me cry
for some reason im not, for some reason im not in pain
i've lost my feelings, i feel no sorrow
i love no one, trust no one, find happiness nowhere
today is strange, im calm and emotionless
i dont smile, but yet i dont cry, im blank
the painful words slip right by without me noticing
yesterday i would be depressed from your words
today i shrug and barely notice they're said
everyone tells me they love me but how can i love back
if you're emotionless you dont love, which i dont
i dont say it back and they get mad but i dont care
i dont care if you want me back cuz i dont love you
i cant love you, i dont know how i could
ive been stabbed in the back for the last time
cuz now no one will get to reach my backside from where they stand
everyone will be at a distance to enusre my safety
no more tears will be shed no more joyful laughs
now ill live a meaningless and emotionless life
a life without you, without everyone, without pain
i dont even care anymore if i live with my father
as long as i cant feel, as long as im away from you
you gave me false happiness but i returned it today
you can have your *****ty present back
you're no more of a person now than you ever were before
you're better of without me
im better off without you and your pain your non-existing love
this is the final goodbye to you and i dont care if you cry
you've left me numb so your sobs wont pierce my heart
your smile cant bring me happiness
go on live your life and forget all about me




Copyright © deadbloodyrose ... [ 2004-06-21 14:37:07]
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Re: numb (User Rating: 1 )
by deathdrop on Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 02:42:04 PM AEST
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oh so sad!!!!
but if you don't feel the hurt then i guess it is kind of a good thing.


Re: numb (User Rating: 1 )
by AlyssaMarie on Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 03:21:26 PM AEST
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your poem is wonderful, you allow the reader to know exaclty how your feeling. Wonderful poem, I am sorry though you feel that way, I feel it also.

A small suggestion, try breaking it into stanzas, it may make it easier to read.

AlyssaMarie


Re: numb (User Rating: 1 )
by xXxFaygoFetishxXx on Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 10:29:36 PM AEST
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I've felt that way so many times before.
It almost feels good but, after awhile it sucks.
Not feeling anything.
*sigh*
I'm glad your happy with Jeff though =D lol.
Love you =P
::Elizabeth::




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