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[aid] => Mick
[title] => you broke her
[time] => 2002-10-19 15:40:00
[hometext] => my friends boyfriend dumped her and she moved to virginia, she wrote me letters telling me how she felt about it all, so i took what she felt and wrote it in a poem. this is for allie ingenito and tony
Email me at kittilove@msn.com to tell me your comments please!!!!!!!!!!!! [bodytext] => She walks in silence as she thinks of you her life gets harder with every passing minute she is not with you anymore that facts kills her a little more each day. she walks down a deserted street, not knowing where she is going, but she has to get away from you, from me, from herself, from everything. she turns s corner to see you standing ther, only it is not you, she is imagining youre everywhere she looks everywher she goes she wants you back she needs you she keeps walking into the darkness she wishes she could still be with you you are the only reason she lives, she loves you more tha life itself. she stops, her tall, gorgeous figure leans against a wall she is so delicate and confused so fragile and easy to break and you broke her she begins to cry, crying tears for you Did you really love her? Or was it all a lie? she was afraid to show her love to you, afraid of letting you down she continues to walk, deeper into the darkness, she remembers you, your hair, your eyes, your touch if only she was still with you. As she is walking she sees something shiney on the ground She picks it up. she examines it. it is but a razor blade. she slowly and delicatley brings the shiney metal object to her soft white wrist. she pushes it into her skin she moves the blade to make a scar She is frightened, so scared and sad she looks down at her wrist she is slowly bleeding to death she realizes she is doomed to die She says " i love you" To noone in particular but it was meant for you and with one last breath she lay down to die. [comments] => 8 [counter] => 244 [topic] => 13 [informant] => jenni [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )
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