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Array ( [sid] => 52939 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => his gun in my face [time] => 2004-06-20 23:18:48 [hometext] => [bodytext] => his gun in my face
and I知 laughing
laughing hard

and he hates me for it
he wants my fear
(he wants submission)

he threatens me
he shouts at me
the barrel resting on my lips

and I知 still laughing
harder and harder
screaming at him
"DO IT DO IT DO IT"

I call him names
I taunt him
I prod him on
I want that bullet
more than he wants to give it to me

(my skin is fire
my lungs are full of lightning
every single thing I am
is something meant to destroy)

teeth break off at the gum line
as the butt of the gun meets my face
with laughter, I spit blood
and call him a chicken*****

his boot in my stomach
his fist at my jaw
doing everything he can
to avoid it

(time slowed
as we dipped and twirled
in that violent little dance
and then time stopped completely
as his aim faltered
his face contorted
and he slowly let his arm fall)

his gun at his side
I知 not laughing anymore
and he's just crying

and I hate him for it
god, how I hate him for it [comments] => 6 [counter] => 152 [topic] => 14 [informant] => Cancer [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 15 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => DreamsandWishes )
his gun in my face

Contributed by Cancer on Sunday, 20th June 2004 @ 11:18:48 PM in AEST
Topic: DreamsandWishes



his gun in my face
and I知 laughing
laughing hard

and he hates me for it
he wants my fear
(he wants submission)

he threatens me
he shouts at me
the barrel resting on my lips

and I知 still laughing
harder and harder
screaming at him
"DO IT DO IT DO IT"

I call him names
I taunt him
I prod him on
I want that bullet
more than he wants to give it to me

(my skin is fire
my lungs are full of lightning
every single thing I am
is something meant to destroy)

teeth break off at the gum line
as the butt of the gun meets my face
with laughter, I spit blood
and call him a chicken*****

his boot in my stomach
his fist at my jaw
doing everything he can
to avoid it

(time slowed
as we dipped and twirled
in that violent little dance
and then time stopped completely
as his aim faltered
his face contorted
and he slowly let his arm fall)

his gun at his side
I知 not laughing anymore
and he's just crying

and I hate him for it
god, how I hate him for it




Copyright ツゥ Cancer ... [ 2004-06-20 23:18:48]
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Re: his gun in my face (User Rating: 1 )
by betty on Sunday, 20th June 2004 @ 11:21:24 PM AEST
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that was very intense and I hope not written out of experience. Good poem-betty


Re: his gun in my face (User Rating: 1 )
by Black13 on Sunday, 20th June 2004 @ 11:36:55 PM AEST
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Cancer dude this one was wicked.
All I can say.
Just wicked as it was.


Re: his gun in my face (User Rating: 1 )
by RonMiller on Sunday, 20th June 2004 @ 11:41:42 PM AEST
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This is just an awesome story...

Ron


Re: his gun in my face (User Rating: 1 )
by Silent-No-More on Sunday, 20th June 2004 @ 11:44:12 PM AEST
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This may well be the most powerful poem I've read on this site. I am completely totaled by it. Incredibly well written and seriously intense. I have no idea how you wrote that without lacing it with a few dozen swears--- I can barely managed to commit without throwing a few in here. Geesh! (and that's no where near strong enough - if you know what I mean).

Amazed at your strength-
SNM


Re: his gun in my face (User Rating: 1 )
by Vitreous_Soul on Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 03:03:26 AM AEST
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Genius, pure genius. I'm with Jeff on this one; no comment can effectively sum up just how wicked this is.

Imbibing cyanide,
-V.S.


Re: his gun in my face (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 07:56:14 AM AEST
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wow, my head is realing from this poem, great write,

pixie xx




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