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Array ( [sid] => 52569 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The Secret Palce [time] => 2004-06-18 12:58:52 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Let me take you to the secret palce,
A place of purity.
Where love is real, and true worship is revealed.
Allow me to cover you with my prayers.
Allow me to pour the cool waters of senusality upon your skin, so that you can feel my touch.
Allow me to kiss the fruit of your lips, to succumb to your succulent taste of strawberries and passionfruit.
I need to feast upon your love, to set free the fire that's been burning inside of me.
Where we can lie down in the green grass of Paradise, flesh to flesh, unashamed.
Where the moon shines brightly and the stars dance silently...
Where God is standing in the shadows and applaudes our union as man and wife...
In the secret place. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 158 [topic] => 2 [informant] => mickie [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

The Secret Palce

Contributed by mickie on Friday, 18th June 2004 @ 12:58:52 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

Let me take you to the secret palce,
A place of purity.
Where love is real, and true worship is revealed.
Allow me to cover you with my prayers.
Allow me to pour the cool waters of senusality upon your skin, so that you can feel my touch.
Allow me to kiss the fruit of your lips, to succumb to your succulent taste of strawberries and passionfruit.
I need to feast upon your love, to set free the fire that's been burning inside of me.
Where we can lie down in the green grass of Paradise, flesh to flesh, unashamed.
Where the moon shines brightly and the stars dance silently...
Where God is standing in the shadows and applaudes our union as man and wife...
In the secret place.

Copyright © mickie ... [ 2004-06-18 12:58:52]
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Re: The Secret Palce (User Rating: 1 )
by lostinmyself on Friday, 18th June 2004 @ 01:22:12 PM AEST
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This is beautiful mon.
Really good.
Great write,
phil xxx

Re: The Secret Palce (User Rating: 1 )
by recklessguy on Friday, 18th June 2004 @ 02:00:51 PM AEST
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tasteful write
reckless

Re: The Secret Palce (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Saturday, 24th July 2004 @ 12:03:14 AM AEST
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great write. =]]

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