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Array ( [sid] => 52475 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Speciman [time] => 2004-06-17 21:21:09 [hometext] => To Vitreous_Soul...for no reason beyond the fact that i love you, hate to see you upset and wanted to remind you i shall never tire of you [bodytext] => Mysical man of monumental capacity
You are the typification of veracity
Strong and solid, my quarry of stability
Under your shield I feel infallibility

Power you protrude with hypnotic ferocity
Etched on my soul, your extreme generosity
Risk reaps reward, faith in love's personeity
Model of merriment in our synchroneity

Animosity mars not your magnanimity
Nonpareil lead, speciman of sublimity [comments] => 7 [counter] => 173 [topic] => 2 [informant] => brigitte7735 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

Speciman

Contributed by brigitte7735 on Thursday, 17th June 2004 @ 09:21:09 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

Mysical man of monumental capacity
You are the typification of veracity
Strong and solid, my quarry of stability
Under your shield I feel infallibility

Power you protrude with hypnotic ferocity
Etched on my soul, your extreme generosity
Risk reaps reward, faith in love's personeity
Model of merriment in our synchroneity

Animosity mars not your magnanimity
Nonpareil lead, speciman of sublimity

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Re: Speciman (User Rating: 1 )
by pyrofairyburning on Thursday, 17th June 2004 @ 09:26:07 PM AEST
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Just a question, does this figure represent some one else to you ?

Blessed Be,
Tink

Re: Speciman (User Rating: 1 )
by STRaNGe_LiNDSeY on Thursday, 17th June 2004 @ 10:02:21 PM AEST
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Wonderful write, Vanessa. Dan will love it. :) At least he's got you through these times. I wish you both the best of luck.

Re: Speciman (User Rating: 1 )
by Black13 on Thursday, 17th June 2004 @ 11:58:38 PM AEST
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Outside of the fact that I think subliminity would have worked better if it wasn't in rhyme. :P
I liked it and the My Super Man.
Really cool write and you expressed your feelings very well.
I do hope Dan feels better after reading this. :D

Re: Speciman (User Rating: 1 )
by Rakerman1999 on Friday, 18th June 2004 @ 05:11:27 AM AEST
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Well done my friend and what's wrong with VS?? I've noticed he hasnt been posting much. Tell him his seat at the bar is safe 'til he needs it. ;o) In any case this was a great write! :

well done
Roses
Larry

Re: Speciman (User Rating: 1 )
by Stitch on Friday, 18th June 2004 @ 05:32:59 PM AEST
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You and Dan must indeed be just right for each other. I can feel him in your writes and you in his. I hope whatever is troubling him is diminished. I'll be praying for that.
Stitch

Re: Speciman (User Rating: 1 )
by Silent-No-More on Tuesday, 22nd June 2004 @ 03:49:06 PM AEST
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Oh, Vanessa - you had me with the comment at the top of this one. (I'm such a romantic fool!) This is wonderful... as is the intent.

Wishing only wonderful things for you and Dan...

"i shall never tire of you"r writes : )
SNM

Re: Speciman (User Rating: 1 )
by forever_lonely on Monday, 28th June 2004 @ 08:27:02 PM AEST
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And now one stroles to the most recent of your wonderous write, and what a write it is indeed, Dan has truely shown me what talent is since i joined on this site, to read a few of my comments on his work you will see how much i appriciate his comments and how much i look up to him as a writer, but he doesnt stop there at showing me talent in its purest form, for then he showed me you, and once again i see how poems should be written, im begginning to feel like my poems are but in vein and are all quite worthless sometimes, when i see talent like yours, dans larrys, neptunes, eternitys, strange lindseys etc and maybe im just beginning to realise something i should have long ago but well as they say,
'but not to matter for the ramblings of a fool'

As for the write vanessa it is beautiful, a sure certainty to pick dan up whatever mood he be in, a true blessing you both have found one another it truely is,

Many thanks for sharing your writes so far and i look ever forward tot he up coming poems

Luke

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