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Array ( [sid] => 52393 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Arguments... [time] => 2004-06-17 13:28:25 [hometext] => to all my family that thought i was strong you were wrong to all my friends that didnt know now you do now you will,to all those people who might of loved me im sorry...ive ended me too quickly and ended a life time along with it...sorry [bodytext] => all those nights
all those screams droning in my head
like a drill
over took
going over and over and over and
STOP IT!
please
silently my voice fades away
unnoticed
am i that unimportant
to not stand out like i should
to make it
i guess not...
i see this like a dream
but rewake to realise its not
and fall into a deeper reality
absence of me
lingers on
but one day someone
noone will say
is she....still here?
and you'll have to think before another breathe
of wasted words
might as well say nothing
like i did
now im gone
you can carry on
all you want
so i cannot hear
only in my dreams
realising
i dont have to face it anymore
this nightmare is....
.....over
and my new best friend
is the razer end
i thrust it into my skin
all my blood shed
all those words said
was to end this pain
as quickly as i can
and stay sane
for a little longer
im dizzy
im holding on to my vein
to squirt the blood faster
end it....
i drop the razer
and dont hear my shout
goodbye..
but noone will hear it anyway
so i whisper
and hope it fades on
for another day
...goodbye......
[comments] => 1 [counter] => 206 [topic] => 36 [informant] => Hannah_Heaven [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )
Arguments...

Contributed by Hannah_Heaven on Thursday, 17th June 2004 @ 01:28:25 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide



all those nights
all those screams droning in my head
like a drill
over took
going over and over and over and
STOP IT!
please
silently my voice fades away
unnoticed
am i that unimportant
to not stand out like i should
to make it
i guess not...
i see this like a dream
but rewake to realise its not
and fall into a deeper reality
absence of me
lingers on
but one day someone
noone will say
is she....still here?
and you'll have to think before another breathe
of wasted words
might as well say nothing
like i did
now im gone
you can carry on
all you want
so i cannot hear
only in my dreams
realising
i dont have to face it anymore
this nightmare is....
.....over
and my new best friend
is the razer end
i thrust it into my skin
all my blood shed
all those words said
was to end this pain
as quickly as i can
and stay sane
for a little longer
im dizzy
im holding on to my vein
to squirt the blood faster
end it....
i drop the razer
and dont hear my shout
goodbye..
but noone will hear it anyway
so i whisper
and hope it fades on
for another day
...goodbye......




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Re: Arguments... (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Thursday, 17th June 2004 @ 03:39:06 PM AEST
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aww sorry for your pain, you have a great way of expressing your feelings, keep it up

pixie xx




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