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Array ( [sid] => 52352 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Scare [time] => 2004-06-17 07:53:37 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Someone near...
where?
look around the corner
on the street
the edge of time
at your feet
where
night
slowly drifts up and around
your presence
taking a hold
on your life
your thoughts
how
possibilities are endless
we run through time
and space
to know
to learn
what we see before us
is not always the full
complete
truth.
look
at me.
what do you
see?
you don’t see me
you see who you think
I am
who is she?
she is not me
myself...
another
whom you would not
recognize
or understand
whose mind is wandering
lost
out of control
when forced
or pressured
out of control
take this mind
torture it
it has already been
more than you can know
more than needed
why
do I
have to show
the who
why not
to you
the truth?
hell
is deep
but warm. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 159 [topic] => 61 [informant] => kimi [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => selfstruggles )

Scare

Contributed by kimi on Thursday, 17th June 2004 @ 07:53:37 AM in AEST
Topic: selfstruggles

Someone near...
where?
look around the corner
on the street
the edge of time
at your feet
where
night
slowly drifts up and around
your presence
taking a hold
on your life
your thoughts
how
possibilities are endless
we run through time
and space
to know
to learn
what we see before us
is not always the full
complete
truth.
look
at me.
what do you
see?
you don’t see me
you see who you think
I am
who is she?
she is not me
myself...
another
whom you would not
recognize
or understand
whose mind is wandering
lost
out of control
when forced
or pressured
out of control
take this mind
torture it
it has already been
more than you can know
more than needed
why
do I
have to show
the who
why not
to you
the truth?
hell
is deep
but warm.

Copyright © kimi ... [ 2004-06-17 07:53:37]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Scare (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Thursday, 17th June 2004 @ 08:02:19 AM AEST
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very emotive , great write

pixie xx

Re: Scare (User Rating: 1 )
by apollo on Thursday, 17th June 2004 @ 08:32:57 AM AEST
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very compelling. quite deep as well i must say. i enjoyed this wonderful write.

brandon

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