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Array ( [sid] => 52195 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Dear Lie [time] => 2004-06-16 09:00:37 [hometext] => A possible note to all habitual liars [bodytext] => You think your clever and your so smart
Well I think its ridiculous because you don't even have a heart
Theres nothing sincere about your meaning
Your really thoughtless and quite revealing

You think that you can hide behind your name
You stand there 'shameless' as 'bold' as fame
For others it would be easy, I would just say get a new look
But for you, your just impossible you don't even play by the book

Your not even human
If you are, you certainly have no feeling
Because everthing you do is so demeaning

So for you, all I have to say
Is Wake-Up-Wake-Up
Just let truth lead the way [comments] => 4 [counter] => 183 [topic] => 6 [informant] => SweetRhythm [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 7 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => AngryPoetry )

Dear Lie

Contributed by SweetRhythm on Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 09:00:37 AM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

You think your clever and your so smart
Well I think its ridiculous because you don't even have a heart
Theres nothing sincere about your meaning
Your really thoughtless and quite revealing

You think that you can hide behind your name
You stand there 'shameless' as 'bold' as fame
For others it would be easy, I would just say get a new look
But for you, your just impossible you don't even play by the book

Your not even human
If you are, you certainly have no feeling
Because everthing you do is so demeaning

So for you, all I have to say
Is Wake-Up-Wake-Up
Just let truth lead the way

Copyright © SweetRhythm ... [ 2004-06-16 09:00:37]
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Re: Dear Lie (User Rating: 1 )
by frejya on Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 09:25:49 AM AEST
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i see some flaws here if u dont mind me sharing it with you but it wud be helpfull if u keep the count of ur syllables n chk ur rythm n btw its you're n not your
anyways i like the theme n lyrics
nice poem
me

Re: Dear Lie (User Rating: 1 )
by LiquidChaos on Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 11:00:35 AM AEST
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Hmmm....you havn't by any chance been listening to the Lostprophets lately have you? They have a song that goes...

So are we lost or do we know
Which direction we should go?
Sit around and wait for
Someone to take our hand
And lead the way.
Cause every day we're getting older
And every day we all grow colder.
We're sick of waiting for our answers.
Wake up
Wake up
Wake up
I'm so tired of waiting....

blah blah. Anyways your poem reminded me of that song. Nice write...just some rhythmical errors but good overall!

Re: Dear Lie (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 11:50:33 AM AEST
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good poem, keep em coming

pixie xx

Re: Dear Lie (User Rating: 1 )
by DragonLuvSong on Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 09:28:55 PM AEST
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i like the idea and the content, but i think it could flow better, i think it is on the road to being its very best.

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