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Array ( [sid] => 52127 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Forever Love [time] => 2004-06-15 19:14:17 [hometext] => My love for this man will last forever.. [bodytext] => A love that has no end
Stands strong through any weather
Like a marble rock
That refuses to whether away
Even after millions of years

An old oak tree
Swaying slightly in the wind
The worst thunder storm in years
Beats on the aged tree
But even after The clouds pass
And the sun shines down again
The tree still stands
Bruised and battered
But holding on strong

My love for you
Is stronger
Stronger than that rock
Than that tree
I do not know if I could love you
Anymore than I do now
If my love should ever die
Then I too
Will die with it

And if ever you may leave me
I know not how strong I'll be
Though I will try
Try to live without the one I love

I know that I'm not perfect
I cannot promise
That I'll never make you mad
I know at some point
I'll guilt trip you
Actually I already have
But I will promise you
My heart with all my love

Jason left me
Because I wasn't good enough
I hope to God
I'm good enough for you
I worry though
Because I gave him everything
But only received stabbing wounds in return
I think that I'll give you
More than everything
And pray that
Forever we will be

I know
Without you
The trees will have no colour
The flowers will all die
Nothing will be beautiful
In the world I hold so dear
You are my eyes
To make me see this beauty
I can do nothing except thank you
For always being there for me

I will love you
Until the last wolf
Has cried to the moon
The last Robin has seen it's last spring
Until the rivers of the world
Of my heart
Stop flowing

I will love thee
Forever

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Forever Love

Contributed by night_child on Tuesday, 15th June 2004 @ 07:14:17 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



A love that has no end
Stands strong through any weather
Like a marble rock
That refuses to whether away
Even after millions of years

An old oak tree
Swaying slightly in the wind
The worst thunder storm in years
Beats on the aged tree
But even after The clouds pass
And the sun shines down again
The tree still stands
Bruised and battered
But holding on strong

My love for you
Is stronger
Stronger than that rock
Than that tree
I do not know if I could love you
Anymore than I do now
If my love should ever die
Then I too
Will die with it

And if ever you may leave me
I know not how strong I'll be
Though I will try
Try to live without the one I love

I know that I'm not perfect
I cannot promise
That I'll never make you mad
I know at some point
I'll guilt trip you
Actually I already have
But I will promise you
My heart with all my love

Jason left me
Because I wasn't good enough
I hope to God
I'm good enough for you
I worry though
Because I gave him everything
But only received stabbing wounds in return
I think that I'll give you
More than everything
And pray that
Forever we will be

I know
Without you
The trees will have no colour
The flowers will all die
Nothing will be beautiful
In the world I hold so dear
You are my eyes
To make me see this beauty
I can do nothing except thank you
For always being there for me

I will love you
Until the last wolf
Has cried to the moon
The last Robin has seen it's last spring
Until the rivers of the world
Of my heart
Stop flowing

I will love thee
Forever





Copyright © night_child ... [ 2004-06-15 19:14:17]
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Re: Forever Love (User Rating: 1 )
by bebe20071 on Tuesday, 15th June 2004 @ 09:09:48 PM AEST
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it is very nice and sweet I personally like it keep up the good work


Re: Forever Love (User Rating: 1 )
by whisper-of-night on Monday, 5th July 2004 @ 07:22:07 PM AEST
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Awww this is very touching and sweet, I am glad finally you made up your mind, and I truly hope you and him will last forever and more...... try to be good now and let nothing or no-boom come between you two again okay......? Look after it with love and care and one day it will bloosm......^-^




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