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An intricate maze of solitude filled with love
and happiness.
Heavenly peace and love are there.
It's a place where I have been before.
Near death is when I first visited this place.
My pace is slow when I visit its corridors.
Loving solitude's place is at the labyrinth's
opening.
Green fields of my soul lay before me,
and oh, what a wonderful feeling of love.
My retreat is a special gift from Him above.
Whenever I want to escape this hideous
world, I go there.
It's a place where I'll be forever,
oneday.
And hey, can't wait till I get there.
One day He'll call and say,
Come on son, I'm waiting for you!
I'll be there to hold your hand. [comments] => 4 [counter] => 209 [topic] => 11 [informant] => GeorgeJamesDelgado [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => ChristianPoetry )

The Labyrinth within my Soul...

Contributed by GeorgeJamesDelgado on Tuesday, 15th June 2004 @ 08:03:17 AM in AEST
Topic: ChristianPoetry

is a place where I go when I feel alone.
An intricate maze of solitude filled with love
and happiness.
Heavenly peace and love are there.
It's a place where I have been before.
Near death is when I first visited this place.
My pace is slow when I visit its corridors.
Loving solitude's place is at the labyrinth's
opening.
Green fields of my soul lay before me,
and oh, what a wonderful feeling of love.
My retreat is a special gift from Him above.
Whenever I want to escape this hideous
world, I go there.
It's a place where I'll be forever,
oneday.
And hey, can't wait till I get there.
One day He'll call and say,
Come on son, I'm waiting for you!
I'll be there to hold your hand.

Copyright © GeorgeJamesDelgado ... [ 2004-06-15 08:03:17]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: The Labyrinth within my Soul... (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Tuesday, 6th July 2004 @ 01:54:03 AM AEST
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lovely:) hugs n' love nessa

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Re: The Labyrinth within my Soul... (User Rating: 1 )
by coldestflame on Saturday, 10th July 2004 @ 03:40:40 AM AEST
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hey.. i lik ur pome a lot.. gr8 rite.. tc g

Re: The Labyrinth within my Soul... (User Rating: 1 )
by Lionel on Wednesday, 20th October 2004 @ 09:58:30 AM AEST
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I think you and I are somewhat alike. Sometimes I feel close and other times, so far from God. I know it's sin that remains with me that causes the time of estrangment. I go to our little church to cut grass or repair something, and I've found it so peaceful there, just sitting in a pew with no-one else around. Very good poem; by the way.God bless you.

Re: The Labyrinth within my Soul... (User Rating: 1 )
by GeorgeJamesDelgado on Wednesday, 20th October 2004 @ 06:38:41 PM AEST
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Lionel;
Thanks again for your kind comment. I surely do appreciate your kind words of understanding. I was almost killed in an industrial accident back in 1992, and I felt the love of heaven. There is nothing to be afraid of when our time comes. I felt the wonderful feeling of eternal rest and the permanent release of fear, heartbreak and pain. I tell you Lionel, it was just wonderful...wonderful!

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