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[aid] => mick
[title] => Nighttime Visitors
[time] => 2004-06-15 00:33:37
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[bodytext] => Crisis lurks in the corner there
I am frozen, trapped by his stare
Now unable to communicate
For me, I know, it’s far too late
Crisis came on Panic’s back
He slipped in here in the black
I know others will be coming soon
Shuffling noises fill darkened room
They shove all the residents out
Confidence falls first in a futile bout
And Security, sadly, is right behind
As evil Frustration takes my mind
The smell of smoke fills the air
Trouble came and smolders there
Neglect creeps nearer to my bed
Tripping up Strength as he fled
The clamor grows to new heights
Trembling, I reach for the light
And when the shadows fall away
I find that Love, alone, has stayed
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[informant] => Silent-No-More
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[score] => 35
[ratings] => 7
[editpoem] => 1
[associated] =>
[topicname] => selfstruggles
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Nighttime Visitors
Contributed by
Silent-No-More
on
Tuesday, 15th June 2004 @ 12:33:37 AM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Crisis lurks in the corner there
I am frozen, trapped by his stare
Now unable to communicate
For me, I know, it’s far too late
Crisis came on Panic’s back
He slipped in here in the black
I know others will be coming soon
Shuffling noises fill darkened room
They shove all the residents out
Confidence falls first in a futile bout
And Security, sadly, is right behind
As evil Frustration takes my mind
The smell of smoke fills the air
Trouble came and smolders there
Neglect creeps nearer to my bed
Tripping up Strength as he fled
The clamor grows to new heights
Trembling, I reach for the light
And when the shadows fall away
I find that Love, alone, has stayed
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Silent-No-More
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2004-06-15 00:33:37]
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Re: Nighttime Visitors
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 15th June 2004 @ 12:38:09 AM AEST
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an exciting read, beautiful as always, i loved it from title to the happy ending:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Nighttime Visitors
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by Fionndruinne on
Tuesday, 15th June 2004 @ 01:37:45 AM AEST
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Very emotional and compelling. Excellent!
Andrew |
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Re: Nighttime Visitors
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by venkat on
Tuesday, 15th June 2004 @ 01:53:10 AM AEST
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| Superb..it is a remarkable piece.. venkat |
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Re: Nighttime Visitors
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by jmpy84 on
Tuesday, 15th June 2004 @ 02:09:59 AM AEST
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| very emotinal great job |
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Re: Nighttime Visitors
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 15th June 2004 @ 02:47:40 AM AEST
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You're very good at characterising emotions. This is the second poem I've read from you which accomplishes it very well, and I'm sure there are virtually limitless poems to be had from an imaginative approach to such inspiration.
Enjoyable, once again . . . |
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Re: Nighttime Visitors
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by brigitte7735 on
Tuesday, 15th June 2004 @ 11:51:22 AM AEST
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ooooooo god your talent oozes off the page
Lots of Love,
Vanessa ( 090404 ) |
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Re: Nighttime Visitors
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by pixie on
Tuesday, 15th June 2004 @ 12:21:59 PM AEST
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brilliant, thanks for sharing,
pixie xx |
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Re: Nighttime Visitors
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by holderofthestone on
Tuesday, 15th June 2004 @ 08:09:13 PM AEST
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| WOW!!! I love this alot. the message is so strong, great choice of words. I think this may be my favorite of yours.... great write A+++++ wow.... |
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Re: Nighttime Visitors
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 15th June 2004 @ 08:19:06 PM AEST
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oh my gosh! Absolutely wonderful write!
Original idea and put together so well. I will definately remeber this one!
Amazing. |
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Re: Nighttime Visitors
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by Stitch on
Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 10:46:30 AM AEST
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I love your writes. They are always so rewarding.
Stitch |
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Re: Nighttime Visitors
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by xSlashXPrettyXSkinx on
Saturday, 19th June 2004 @ 05:12:27 PM AEST
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Very well written friend. Love is always around the corner, right? Well, we all hope so. :) Thanks for sharing.
Lindsey |
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Re: Nighttime Visitors
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by ShadowDaughter on
Tuesday, 22nd June 2004 @ 02:28:28 PM AEST
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Ooooh, nice . . . the personification of emotions, of concepts, really makes this one a very pleasurable poem to read. I like.
--Nora |
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Re: Nighttime Visitors
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 12th May 2006 @ 07:33:21 PM AEST
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Aw, Snemmers, this embodies every emotional thought that can come to a person. Brilliantly written.
Timber
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Re: Nighttime Visitors
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 12th May 2006 @ 07:34:30 PM AEST
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| Oops, I also meant to say....well at the very least it is a good thing that love stayed. |
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