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Array ( [sid] => 51638 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => optimistic? [time] => 2004-06-12 22:20:43 [hometext] => This is something that I wrote while waiting for a potential date to call. I was waiting all day to hear from him but didn't until 10:30pm and then he says he is going to hang out with his friend instead. I was ***** off. [bodytext] => I'm just sitting here/with full makeup on/and my hair is done/I'm waiting for the phone to ring/but I know it won't/for the simple fact that I've not been optimistic 'bout this situation I've been thrown into this time

optimism is something I had to teach myself again/remain optimistic about you and what we got ourselves into this time

when the phone finally rings/ I debate with my two sides/should I pick it up and sound really bored/or let him hear my answering machine and make him believe that I was half busy?/I'll take the machine this time since last time I picked up I felt like an ass

you don't know/but I waited all week to hear your voice/and then you cut me off after 5 of you time to get back to "your boy" and not to sound jealous yet since we aren't together that way but its a fact that you talk to him almost everyday and it's not fair since I gave you more of myself than he ever will!

you're the cause that's making me go back to my lonely pessimistic self I'm half empty now fill me up before I think otherwise [comments] => 0 [counter] => 242 [topic] => 33 [informant] => Seashell842 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 2 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SecretLove )
optimistic?

Contributed by Seashell842 on Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 10:20:43 PM in AEST
Topic: SecretLove



I'm just sitting here/with full makeup on/and my hair is done/I'm waiting for the phone to ring/but I know it won't/for the simple fact that I've not been optimistic 'bout this situation I've been thrown into this time

optimism is something I had to teach myself again/remain optimistic about you and what we got ourselves into this time

when the phone finally rings/ I debate with my two sides/should I pick it up and sound really bored/or let him hear my answering machine and make him believe that I was half busy?/I'll take the machine this time since last time I picked up I felt like an ass

you don't know/but I waited all week to hear your voice/and then you cut me off after 5 of you time to get back to "your boy" and not to sound jealous yet since we aren't together that way but its a fact that you talk to him almost everyday and it's not fair since I gave you more of myself than he ever will!

you're the cause that's making me go back to my lonely pessimistic self I'm half empty now fill me up before I think otherwise




Copyright © Seashell842 ... [ 2004-06-12 22:20:43]
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