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Upon the crown of nightdark hair,

And seeing there that all was allowed to, I left him wanting more.

The clockbell struck, I made my haste,
But leaving him only a taste

Of what would come, his mind, it raced, it raced and left him wanting more.

And longer on that shore I stayed,
While my heart willingly obeyed

His silent command, from his eyes which play with light forevermore.

I only did so much as stare
Upon the crown of nightdark hair,

And captured there as now I was, I'll stay with him forevermore. [comments] => 4 [counter] => 175 [topic] => 2 [informant] => olivetreedove [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

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Contributed by olivetreedove on Thursday, 10th June 2004 @ 12:13:06 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

I only did so much as stare
Upon the crown of nightdark hair,

And seeing there that all was allowed to, I left him wanting more.

The clockbell struck, I made my haste,
But leaving him only a taste

Of what would come, his mind, it raced, it raced and left him wanting more.

And longer on that shore I stayed,
While my heart willingly obeyed

His silent command, from his eyes which play with light forevermore.

I only did so much as stare
Upon the crown of nightdark hair,

And captured there as now I was, I'll stay with him forevermore.

Copyright © olivetreedove ... [ 2004-06-10 12:13:06]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Untitled (User Rating: 1 )
by Sirena_Degana on Thursday, 10th June 2004 @ 12:38:30 PM AEST
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If i wrote this poem i would call it Cinderella...it just has the air of a cinderella story....what made me think it should be called that is this one part...

The clockbell struck, I made my haste,
But leaving him only a taste

Just a suggestion

Blessed Be!!!

Re: Untitled (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 10th June 2004 @ 12:52:32 PM AEST
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I am not really good on titles, myself. But I liked that it was "untitled" because you never know what to expect when you open the page.
I really liked the romanticism in this,and even had a touch of Poe sound to it. A job well done!
Angel always...godspeed...joni

Re: Untitled (User Rating: 1 )
by GeorgeJamesDelgado on Thursday, 10th June 2004 @ 12:56:22 PM AEST
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Meant to be

GeorgeJamesDelgado

Re: Untitled (User Rating: 1 )
by Kie on Thursday, 10th June 2004 @ 08:47:45 PM AEST
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Title idea:

"Encaptured Stares"

I also thought the poem had a cinderella/fairytale quality to it and enjoyed it immensely.

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