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Array ( [sid] => 50939 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Life [time] => 2004-06-08 10:06:15 [hometext] => This was made by my little sister who all she does is write stuff, but you read it as a tune [bodytext] => We grew up different
We grew up wrong
We grew up side by side
You were a boy
I a girl
2 peas in a far out pod

CHOURUS: Why does everything have to change?
Why does it matter?
Why can’t you accept me for who I am?
I may not be a girlie girl
I may not be a star
But at least I am myself a pea in far out pod

When we got older
And things went wrong
You were always by my side
And
You thought of me
As just a friend
Nothing else could ever amend
But when it did
And you moved away
How was I supposed to be okay?
CHORUS
One day I saw you
Walkin my way
Lookin so fly in your suit
You raved and you hollered
But im okay
Im really over you
I don't need you no more cause I'm my own self
So give me a chance to remember
CHOURUS [comments] => 2 [counter] => 172 [topic] => 22 [informant] => evanj117 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )
Life

Contributed by evanj117 on Tuesday, 8th June 2004 @ 10:06:15 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove



We grew up different
We grew up wrong
We grew up side by side
You were a boy
I a girl
2 peas in a far out pod

CHOURUS: Why does everything have to change?
Why does it matter?
Why can’t you accept me for who I am?
I may not be a girlie girl
I may not be a star
But at least I am myself a pea in far out pod

When we got older
And things went wrong
You were always by my side
And
You thought of me
As just a friend
Nothing else could ever amend
But when it did
And you moved away
How was I supposed to be okay?
CHORUS
One day I saw you
Walkin my way
Lookin so fly in your suit
You raved and you hollered
But im okay
Im really over you
I don't need you no more cause I'm my own self
So give me a chance to remember
CHOURUS




Copyright © evanj117 ... [ 2004-06-08 10:06:15]
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Re: Life (User Rating: 1 )
by hawaii06 on Tuesday, 8th June 2004 @ 08:38:35 PM AEST
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Give your sister props...She's talented in something. Don't let her stop writing...Shecan make it in the world one day...That was really good and I enjoyed it!


Re: Life (User Rating: 1 )
by MissMandy on Tuesday, 15th January 2008 @ 06:55:07 PM AEST
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such a good write.
and so empowering.

who needs a man?




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