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Array ( [sid] => 50559 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I know you didn't want to go... [time] => 2004-06-05 17:14:32 [hometext] => I didn't want him to go...I asked him to stay...but he did nothing said it was for me, and turned away...why would he leave his [bodytext] => "I know you didn't want to go"

What I said before
about saying goodbyes
well yesterday was worst
I said it with tears in my eyes
I didn't want you to go
yet you turned your back
in all hopes that I would not see
but you just still ignored me
you knew it was for the best
and said f* the world
and lay me down to rest
you didn't want to go
yet walked right out the door
and left me there cluless falling to the floor
I haven't cried in a long time
and you were the reason I cried now
please take it back
please dont make me cry anymore
I no longer felt your arms around me
I felt numb and my body became sore
I hoped you would come back
reopen the door
and make the strange feeling dissapear
until i saw the lights in the rearview mirror
the lights of your plane
taking off into the midst
forgetting everything we had
forgetting all the tryst
I had no way to take it back
I will find a way to make me realize
that you were just my true love
in your sweet disguise
I know you didnt want to go
and that was your loss for leaving
so tell me baby please
why it was you mistreating
tell me all of this
when you return home
but if you dont
Ill have that question in my head
cuz there was nothing any one not even you said


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I know you didn't want to go...

Contributed by living_in_my_dream on Saturday, 5th June 2004 @ 05:14:32 PM in AEST
Topic: goodbyepoetry



"I know you didn't want to go"

What I said before
about saying goodbyes
well yesterday was worst
I said it with tears in my eyes
I didn't want you to go
yet you turned your back
in all hopes that I would not see
but you just still ignored me
you knew it was for the best
and said f* the world
and lay me down to rest
you didn't want to go
yet walked right out the door
and left me there cluless falling to the floor
I haven't cried in a long time
and you were the reason I cried now
please take it back
please dont make me cry anymore
I no longer felt your arms around me
I felt numb and my body became sore
I hoped you would come back
reopen the door
and make the strange feeling dissapear
until i saw the lights in the rearview mirror
the lights of your plane
taking off into the midst
forgetting everything we had
forgetting all the tryst
I had no way to take it back
I will find a way to make me realize
that you were just my true love
in your sweet disguise
I know you didnt want to go
and that was your loss for leaving
so tell me baby please
why it was you mistreating
tell me all of this
when you return home
but if you dont
Ill have that question in my head
cuz there was nothing any one not even you said






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Re: I know you didn't want to go... (User Rating: 1 )
by holderofthestone on Saturday, 5th June 2004 @ 05:19:41 PM AEST
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....my life ina nutshell. Ive written a few poems on this topic and I can relate. I was left with nothing, no words no goodbye, no second chance. Its tough, I wish you luck and strength. great poem, always love your work.

im always here for you.... lol


Re: I know you didn't want to go... (User Rating: 1 )
by positivelypurple on Saturday, 5th June 2004 @ 05:56:39 PM AEST
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I can relate...just went through something very similar. Emotions nicely expressed! Keep your head up.


Re: I know you didn't want to go... (User Rating: 1 )
by deadbloodyrose on Sunday, 13th June 2004 @ 11:05:37 AM AEST
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has it happened a few times that your love has walked out of ur life.. or are you like me and write a few poems bout the same occasion? AMI JO


Re: I know you didn't want to go... (User Rating: 1 )
by Bones on Saturday, 19th June 2004 @ 03:39:03 PM AEST
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Very emotional. Excellent usage of words. Very good poem, I really like it. Keep up the good poetry.




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