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[aid] => mick
[title] => Rainstorm
[time] => 2004-06-04 11:14:50
[hometext] => This is the first free-verse poem i've ever written, so please leave feedback...criticize me!lol
[bodytext] => The rain drops fall over a gray misty land Feel the soft splattering of water engulf you The purple clouds wrap their arms around you, Feel the soothing touch of the storm. Feel the grass as you fall So soft, so wet against bare skin Feel the tears you cry inside Spill out upon the Earth’s soft carpet The purple swirls above reach down As Mother Earth wipes away your tears Feel her comforting arms holding you Curl up and listen to her soothing lullaby As the thunder rolls and lightening cracks Listen to nature’s song Feel the harmony flowing through the air Feel the wind racing playfully, dancing it’s own dance The subtle sprinkling rain is the background music, The thunder and lightening the symbols and drums Close your eyes, take a deep breath Smell the fresh scent of wet Earth Feel your last tear fall slowly to the dirt Feel your breathing start to slow And die there peacefully, in the arms of the only mother you’ve ever known. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 164 [topic] => 27 [informant] => BlackFire9786 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => NaturePoetry )
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