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Array ( [sid] => 5030 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => rain [time] => 2002-10-13 22:45:00 [hometext] => well, this is hard to explain. but......one night, i was outside in my pajamas while it was pouring rain and in the middle of the night. i just stood there in the street getting soaked with rain. but at that same moment a whole bunch of horrors flashed through my mind so fast that i can't even name them. so i wrote this poem at that exact time i was stnding in the rain soaked and didn't even care what ppl thought of me anymore. [bodytext] => With the shadow of the moon,
That i can barely see
And the clouds rushing together so mean.
The mudd, like quicksand ,
The rain like tears.
And the feeling so deep;
of the horrors that rush to my feet,
With the puddles of mudd that flow down the street.
As i stand here soaked with rain,
I feel like im the only one
Who feels the pain.
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rain

Contributed by hot_topic on Sunday, 13th October 2002 @ 10:45:00 PM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

With the shadow of the moon,
That i can barely see
And the clouds rushing together so mean.
The mudd, like quicksand ,
The rain like tears.
And the feeling so deep;
of the horrors that rush to my feet,
With the puddles of mudd that flow down the street.
As i stand here soaked with rain,
I feel like im the only one
Who feels the pain.

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Re: rain (User Rating: 1 )
by InexactExactness on Monday, 14th October 2002 @ 07:57:19 AM AEST
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I can honestly say that I know exactly how you feel. I don't thnk i could've put it quite like you do or would of been able to write a poem in the middle of the street while it was raining. But you did and it's actually a really good poem to be written at such a random time. Keep up the good work and know that yur not alone in the way you feel.

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