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Array ( [sid] => 50204 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Because im dead [time] => 2004-06-03 03:51:50 [hometext] => Im not too sure about this but have a read. Plz comment [bodytext] => Locked doors,
Leading to the life I leave behind,
Immortality,
Put to the test,
The knife I take,
Finally, would be my last,
Revealed my wrist,
Metallic object penetrates,
Than pierced into my heart,
The undying beat,
Put to a halt,
Drip,
What am I doing?
Drip,
What am have I done?
A single rush,
Adrenalin surging,
Tears fill my eyes,
Tears of joy,
That the pain would finally end,
I’m nearly discharged,
It’s all gone now,
The reigning darkness,
The floods of red,
Now a distant memory,
just cos I’m dead.
[comments] => 3 [counter] => 198 [topic] => 36 [informant] => corrupted_minds [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 8 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )

Because im dead

Contributed by corrupted_minds on Thursday, 3rd June 2004 @ 03:51:50 AM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

Locked doors,
Leading to the life I leave behind,
Immortality,
Put to the test,
The knife I take,
Finally, would be my last,
Revealed my wrist,
Metallic object penetrates,
Than pierced into my heart,
The undying beat,
Put to a halt,
Drip,
What am I doing?
Drip,
What am have I done?
A single rush,
Adrenalin surging,
Tears fill my eyes,
Tears of joy,
That the pain would finally end,
I’m nearly discharged,
It’s all gone now,
The reigning darkness,
The floods of red,
Now a distant memory,
just cos I’m dead.

Copyright Â© corrupted_minds ... [ 2004-06-03 03:51:50]
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Re: Because im dead (User Rating: 1 )
by Vermillion on Thursday, 3rd June 2004 @ 05:43:17 AM AEST
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one of the best suicide poems ive ever read, quick and to the point. much like death. good read.
~vermillion~

Re: Because im dead (User Rating: 1 )
by Princesaazul16 on Thursday, 3rd June 2004 @ 08:06:43 AM AEST
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Oh my! I loved this poem. Very good job. Keep up the good work. Nice write. Hope to hear more.
~Stace~

Re: Because im dead (User Rating: 1 )
by shorty_52 on Thursday, 3rd June 2004 @ 02:55:51 PM AEST
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i really liked this poem it expresses why people should think b4 they act. good job and keep up the good work. if u wanna talk to sum1 i'm always here for u .
~allyson~

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