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Array ( [sid] => 50161 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => forgive [time] => 2004-06-02 19:58:54 [hometext] => This was somthing that is really way too sappy but in my opinioin i did a good job [bodytext] => I fall on my knees and beg you please

give me the chance to be the one

to love you and care for you

don’t think me to sappy for this is all true

I did see what was in front of me

a beautiful thing

love

Lord has it been a long time

since I have seen that flower

But it died

that day I left you

My breath stops every time I think of you

never to come back to me

never to be there at my front door with a card when I am sick

or in my bedroom door way

with that silly look on your face

the one that made me smile

Always waiting to hear your voice

on the other end on the line

hating the way you look at me now

know that I deserve it

wanting to kiss you so badly

to make up for the thing that I didn’t do

to make up for the horrors I put you through

I don’t want to fell this way anymore

I’ve been hurt in the past

What I thought was genuine

was nothing but a mere lie

from people I trusted

that talked about forever

I will forgive with time

But I need help

And I know I betrayed any trust

You had for me

I would do anything to earn it back

Over time I have begun to fear

That you don’t feel for me anymore

The thought has nested itself

Deep within the depth of my heart

The days I told you goodbye

Were horrible

Now every time I talk to you

I walk away and try so hard

Not to cry

As I am now

My dream deceive me

Making me think you will come back

Wishing to know if they were telling the truth

Or were just fantasy

If you will ever come back again

I will hold you till the very end

I don’t expect you to take this and go to me

I don’t expect anything at all

I just want you to know

That I would anything for you

Conquer fears for you

Give everything up for you

I love you
[comments] => 3 [counter] => 384 [topic] => 50 [informant] => adanawa [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 8 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => ApologyPoetry )
forgive

Contributed by adanawa on Wednesday, 2nd June 2004 @ 07:58:54 PM in AEST
Topic: ApologyPoetry



I fall on my knees and beg you please

give me the chance to be the one

to love you and care for you

don’t think me to sappy for this is all true

I did see what was in front of me

a beautiful thing

love

Lord has it been a long time

since I have seen that flower

But it died

that day I left you

My breath stops every time I think of you

never to come back to me

never to be there at my front door with a card when I am sick

or in my bedroom door way

with that silly look on your face

the one that made me smile

Always waiting to hear your voice

on the other end on the line

hating the way you look at me now

know that I deserve it

wanting to kiss you so badly

to make up for the thing that I didn’t do

to make up for the horrors I put you through

I don’t want to fell this way anymore

I’ve been hurt in the past

What I thought was genuine

was nothing but a mere lie

from people I trusted

that talked about forever

I will forgive with time

But I need help

And I know I betrayed any trust

You had for me

I would do anything to earn it back

Over time I have begun to fear

That you don’t feel for me anymore

The thought has nested itself

Deep within the depth of my heart

The days I told you goodbye

Were horrible

Now every time I talk to you

I walk away and try so hard

Not to cry

As I am now

My dream deceive me

Making me think you will come back

Wishing to know if they were telling the truth

Or were just fantasy

If you will ever come back again

I will hold you till the very end

I don’t expect you to take this and go to me

I don’t expect anything at all

I just want you to know

That I would anything for you

Conquer fears for you

Give everything up for you

I love you




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Re: forgive (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Wednesday, 2nd June 2004 @ 08:05:23 PM AEST
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This is an awesome poem and I hope things work out for you.


Re: forgive (User Rating: 1 )
by nail-to-the-head on Wednesday, 2nd June 2004 @ 08:28:01 PM AEST
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very well structured and writen. hope all goes well.

+ nail-to-the-head +


Re: forgive (User Rating: 1 )
by Fionndruinne on Thursday, 3rd June 2004 @ 01:14:37 AM AEST
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Great job! And none too sappy for me. Though I'm not sure about the line "Deep within the depth of my heart". Kind of repeats itself a bit needlessly.
But never mind my nitpicking. This was well done! Keep it up.
Andrew




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