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Array ( [sid] => 50123 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Only Dandelions [time] => 2004-06-02 14:56:03 [hometext] => [bodytext] => You are the one
In a world of weeds
With shining color

I am misplaced
In a lush garden
Dull, wilting

Only a weed
We're too alike
Look around
We're too different

They marvel at your beauty
Why do they step on me?
Hold us close, now, compare
Switch surroundings

Who's getting stepped on now? [comments] => 4 [counter] => 161 [topic] => 21 [informant] => youlied [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )

Only Dandelions

Contributed by youlied on Wednesday, 2nd June 2004 @ 02:56:03 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

You are the one
In a world of weeds
With shining color

I am misplaced
In a lush garden
Dull, wilting

Only a weed
We're too alike
Look around
We're too different

They marvel at your beauty
Why do they step on me?
Hold us close, now, compare
Switch surroundings

Who's getting stepped on now?

Copyright © youlied ... [ 2004-06-02 14:56:03]
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Re: Only Dandelions (User Rating: 1 )
by Overstated on Wednesday, 2nd June 2004 @ 03:09:51 PM AEST
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lovely idea am very jealous!! very good!

Re: Only Dandelions (User Rating: 1 )
by alecfernadez on Wednesday, 2nd June 2004 @ 03:13:29 PM AEST
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I liked the last line at the end, I think this poem was very well written, and congratulations for pulling of something that makes poets go green with envy

Re: Only Dandelions (User Rating: 1 )
by alasdaircairns on Wednesday, 2nd June 2004 @ 08:39:03 PM AEST
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Damn funny. Great write.

Re: Only Dandelions (User Rating: 1 )
by Ina on Sunday, 6th June 2004 @ 01:08:26 AM AEST
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I love bitter poems!
Not so fond of stepped on dandelions.
great super.

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