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Array ( [sid] => 49786 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Bz-1906yszpf-how-I-lovE [time] => 2004-05-31 07:09:26 [hometext] => notice how it continues from line to line, spot the hiaku poem as well. I discovered it as i was meditating to my oaf tree i planted when i was 1 and is the reason why i shift too and from it, the girl i speak of is also my desire, not a real person btw [bodytext] =>




Sitting in motion


STOPPED AWAKE/ fallinG asleeP
gasping for air
Like a rabbit in its warren, been drowned

Death, gives way to



Life - Rebirth

Satire chains of history repeated the process
Life generations swap topic now


Re-insert tape, Turn to side B

Institutions, pummle your ideals
The world spins on the axis of evil
Brilliant is the poem

For being stupid,
Im very sorry, my heart aches so bad
Twisting my expressions of love

I did love you
But i moved on, as the world still does

As is, Iam the world
and the world is me because of the system i like

I produced and fostered
The acorn that grew into a slpendid oak
since birth, this tree is me

you was like the rain that fell on my green leaves
Now what you shed upon me, makes me grow
And gives me life


As it was how i decided

Life is the the earth, as loves lightening break unto it
Contuctioning its destructivness below it
swallowing it into the dirt, which is turned to slag
from the power of my conductivity
She has been defeted

There wont be another me
Nor be of you because Iam different

broke the Chain

destroyed my eternal rain

the system of my life
Rejected for what it so rightly was
Dissipated like the mist

Its now fallen, like a curtain of uncertainty

Am I now free

Or simply




free

of

you

?

?

? [comments] => 2 [counter] => 174 [topic] => 43 [informant] => 01_zanzebar [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 9 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )
Bz-1906yszpf-how-I-lovE

Contributed by 01_zanzebar on Monday, 31st May 2004 @ 07:09:26 AM in AEST
Topic: oops








Sitting in motion


STOPPED AWAKE/ fallinG asleeP
gasping for air
Like a rabbit in its warren, been drowned

Death, gives way to



Life - Rebirth

Satire chains of history repeated the process
Life generations swap topic now


Re-insert tape, Turn to side B

Institutions, pummle your ideals
The world spins on the axis of evil
Brilliant is the poem

For being stupid,
Im very sorry, my heart aches so bad
Twisting my expressions of love

I did love you
But i moved on, as the world still does

As is, Iam the world
and the world is me because of the system i like

I produced and fostered
The acorn that grew into a slpendid oak
since birth, this tree is me

you was like the rain that fell on my green leaves
Now what you shed upon me, makes me grow
And gives me life


As it was how i decided

Life is the the earth, as loves lightening break unto it
Contuctioning its destructivness below it
swallowing it into the dirt, which is turned to slag
from the power of my conductivity
She has been defeted

There wont be another me
Nor be of you because Iam different

broke the Chain

destroyed my eternal rain

the system of my life
Rejected for what it so rightly was
Dissipated like the mist

Its now fallen, like a curtain of uncertainty

Am I now free

Or simply




free

of

you

?

?

?




Copyright © 01_zanzebar ... [ 2004-05-31 07:09:26]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: Bz-1906yszpf-how-I-lovE (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Monday, 31st May 2004 @ 07:14:26 AM AEST
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This is a good poem lots of emotions and thoughts


Re: Bz-1906yszpf-how-I-lovE (User Rating: 1 )
by buchi on Wednesday, 7th July 2004 @ 12:24:30 PM AEST
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technically amazing




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