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Array ( [sid] => 49513 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => pieces [time] => 2004-05-28 18:40:22 [hometext] => due to a current lack of muse, here's one i wrote about a month ago... comments always welcome [bodytext] => The world breathed me intact
They all steal pieces of me
Earth swallows them into life

She takes her chastising pieces
She strives to replace the parts she’s lost
The hole is bigger than I can fill

His pieces are forgotten
Dark and black and barren
He gave them away without remorse

You ripped away pieces of me
You let me bleed into the air
You threw them away and they believed

I am diminished
I can’t find the pieces
I left my blood everywhere

If you take any more I’ll fall apart
I will melt into life again [comments] => 3 [counter] => 172 [topic] => 13 [informant] => Luinil [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

pieces

Contributed by Luinil on Friday, 28th May 2004 @ 06:40:22 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

The world breathed me intact
They all steal pieces of me
Earth swallows them into life

She takes her chastising pieces
She strives to replace the parts she’s lost
The hole is bigger than I can fill

His pieces are forgotten
Dark and black and barren
He gave them away without remorse

You ripped away pieces of me
You let me bleed into the air
You threw them away and they believed

I am diminished
I can’t find the pieces
I left my blood everywhere

If you take any more I’ll fall apart
I will melt into life again

Copyright Â© Luinil ... [ 2004-05-28 18:40:22]
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Re: pieces (User Rating: 1 )
by full_blur on Friday, 28th May 2004 @ 06:47:08 PM AEST
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excellent write.
Your descriptions are powerful and disturbing. This piece is going to haunt me for a while!

Re: pieces (User Rating: 1 )
by liquidsunshine on Friday, 28th May 2004 @ 06:55:51 PM AEST
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A wonderful write. A word to describe it?
Eerie.
Good though, I liked it.
Bravo and encore!!!
Love,
Chelsea

Re: pieces (User Rating: 1 )
by Brians_Sweety on Friday, 28th May 2004 @ 07:42:12 PM AEST
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Oh my goodness, great poem, very powerful, very touching. I can't say in words how great this is. Thank you for sharing.

Stephanie

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