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Array ( [sid] => 49429 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I End This Fight [time] => 2004-05-28 02:14:00 [hometext] => Im sick of the meaningless sorrys..... [bodytext] => I turn and walk away from you
From words spat through the rain
You and your indecisivness
Have become such a sudden drain
You leech my strength to help you
Taken my will to stay
I could never keep you happy
So this is where I walk away
I wash my hands of all your ways
Can you get any colder
And now you end up all alone
Your the weight gone from my shoulder
If I had seen what would unfold
The past I cannot change
The years I wasted fighting you
But now it seems so strange
That your not the person I met
Was it that long ago?
Did I change you, or you change me
I sit and think but I dont know
We grew apart as you can see
Somewhere it all went wrong
But now I break free of your web
You and me?, we dont belong. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 166 [topic] => 6 [informant] => jt [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 17 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => AngryPoetry )

I End This Fight

Contributed by jt on Friday, 28th May 2004 @ 02:14:00 AM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

I turn and walk away from you
From words spat through the rain
You and your indecisivness
Have become such a sudden drain
You leech my strength to help you
Taken my will to stay
I could never keep you happy
So this is where I walk away
I wash my hands of all your ways
Can you get any colder
And now you end up all alone
Your the weight gone from my shoulder
If I had seen what would unfold
The past I cannot change
The years I wasted fighting you
But now it seems so strange
That your not the person I met
Was it that long ago?
Did I change you, or you change me
I sit and think but I dont know
We grew apart as you can see
Somewhere it all went wrong
But now I break free of your web
You and me?, we dont belong.

Copyright © jt ... [ 2004-05-28 02:14:00]
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Re: I End This Fight (User Rating: 1 )
by DreamWeaver on Friday, 28th May 2004 @ 02:19:00 AM AEST
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This chills me to the core ... strong words, feelings ... a great poem ... Jan

Re: I End This Fight (User Rating: 1 )
by Daniela_Maria_Violin on Friday, 28th May 2004 @ 07:45:09 AM AEST
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wow... very strong write... this is very good. :)

Re: I End This Fight (User Rating: 1 )
by StrangeLittleGirl on Friday, 28th May 2004 @ 07:48:26 AM AEST
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WOW. I think that says enough.....

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