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Array ( [sid] => 49386 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The Winner [time] => 2004-05-27 20:01:41 [hometext] => Who is the real winner here? .. Not my best poem. [bodytext] => These feelings are such that I can’t explain
Feelings of loneliness, desire and pain
With hurt so strong, tears inevitably fall
Kick me while I’m down, while I’m learning to crawl
Burn me while I scream, writhe in agony,
Scald me with your piercing eyes that seem to look through me
My pain is so obvious, how can you be so blind?
You drive me crazy, always on my mind
You torture me, my crumbling soul
My heart is black, charred like coal

It’s all because of you
The mind games that you play
There’s nothing I can do
I’m nothing but your prey
Like a moth to your flame
Foolishly I was drawn in
A stupid pawn in your ***** up game
You said I’d never win

But I’ll take my life
A stalemate
A rusted knife
Just you wait!
I’ll be dead
And then you’ll see
That in the end
The winner –
Is me. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 151 [topic] => 6 [informant] => blackmarker [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => AngryPoetry )

The Winner

Contributed by blackmarker on Thursday, 27th May 2004 @ 08:01:41 PM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

These feelings are such that I can’t explain
Feelings of loneliness, desire and pain
With hurt so strong, tears inevitably fall
Kick me while I’m down, while I’m learning to crawl
Burn me while I scream, writhe in agony,
Scald me with your piercing eyes that seem to look through me
My pain is so obvious, how can you be so blind?
You drive me crazy, always on my mind
You torture me, my crumbling soul
My heart is black, charred like coal

It’s all because of you
The mind games that you play
There’s nothing I can do
I’m nothing but your prey
Like a moth to your flame
Foolishly I was drawn in
A stupid pawn in your ***** up game
You said I’d never win

But I’ll take my life
A stalemate
A rusted knife
Just you wait!
I’ll be dead
And then you’ll see
That in the end
The winner –
Is me.

Copyright Â© blackmarker ... [ 2004-05-27 20:01:41]
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Re: The Winner (User Rating: 1 )
by purplestary on Thursday, 27th May 2004 @ 08:10:57 PM AEST
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wow...very well expressed...i can feel your anger and your need to overcome this. great great write.. i love the end. you have great talent

Re: The Winner (User Rating: 1 )
by holderofthestone on Thursday, 27th May 2004 @ 08:24:28 PM AEST
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Deep. and I think this is a great peom, dont be so hard on yourself. great job here! good luck

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