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Why our love for one another is a thing that I must doubt,
Why a stranger that you meet is not a person that you kiss,
Why our animal-like feelings aren't simple just like this.

Why sophisticated nonsense we do bring upon ourselves,
Why simplicity of action we do put upon our shelves
Why our thought could be so easy and our lives could be serene,
Instead of living lives of swingers with our thoughts that do careen.

From this day foward, dear ones, this is what I aim to do,
Kiss and hug my fellow beings, to show my love for you,
And when my life is over, they'll have to say of me,
He may have had his faults but he was good as he could be. [comments] => 6 [counter] => 162 [topic] => 55 [informant] => norm [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 9 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => dedicatedpoems )

What you do is really you

Contributed by norm on Thursday, 27th May 2004 @ 07:25:02 AM in AEST
Topic: dedicatedpoems

I often sit and wonder what the heck it's all about,
Why our love for one another is a thing that I must doubt,
Why a stranger that you meet is not a person that you kiss,
Why our animal-like feelings aren't simple just like this.

Why sophisticated nonsense we do bring upon ourselves,
Why simplicity of action we do put upon our shelves
Why our thought could be so easy and our lives could be serene,
Instead of living lives of swingers with our thoughts that do careen.

From this day foward, dear ones, this is what I aim to do,
Kiss and hug my fellow beings, to show my love for you,
And when my life is over, they'll have to say of me,
He may have had his faults but he was good as he could be.

Copyright © norm ... [ 2004-05-27 07:25:02]
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Re: What you do is really you (User Rating: 1 )
by poetrygodslove on Thursday, 27th May 2004 @ 07:38:32 AM AEST
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aweeeeee. very good poem. here is a hug. norm, so much love is within us that is so strong that we have to protect it sometimes so we don't get hurt. why we cant really make mistakes as to be like you said in your poem. sandy

Re: What you do is really you (User Rating: 1 )
by Stitch on Thursday, 27th May 2004 @ 08:24:04 AM AEST
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Hugs to you Norm, but save the kisses until after you brush your teeth and so will I!
Stitch

Re: What you do is really you (User Rating: 1 )
by OMEGA_ on Thursday, 27th May 2004 @ 09:27:35 AM AEST
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well done norm
so emotional

Re: What you do is really you (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Thursday, 27th May 2004 @ 11:11:39 AM AEST
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you have a beautiful heart and soul, this is very sweet norm, i, too, like to send *hugs n' love* into the world, because you never know who might need that bit of kindness, *kiss on cheek for you* hugs n' love nessa

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Re: What you do is really you (User Rating: 1 )
by mountainhigh on Thursday, 27th May 2004 @ 09:28:04 PM AEST
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This one I like much.......but I must say I'm glad I'm human and not of the K-9 breed.

Thank you for sharing this.

Chris

Re: What you do is really you (User Rating: 1 )
by lovingcritters on Friday, 28th May 2004 @ 05:02:05 PM AEST
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Shucks Durn, you don't have to hug and kiss me.
You do everyday by writing poems like this and with your poetry.
Hugs and kisses to you too!
I'm a hugger......so watch out
love
consue

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