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Array ( [sid] => 49224 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Agony's Arms [time] => 2004-05-26 16:09:01 [hometext] => [bodytext] => A picture of darkness,
Gloom, despair,
Hate and agony,
Miserable, scared.

Light blockaded
By hopeless thoughts.
Doomed to distress,
Bitterly fought.

Throbbing anguish,
Screaming grief,
Thrashing torment,
Fleeing relief.

Silent desperation
Tragic affliction
Terrible mortification
Deathly depression.

Merciless pain
Ferocious feelings
Leave me raw
In search of healing.

There's consciousness
Of light inside.
How long in darkness
Will I reside? [comments] => 7 [counter] => 282 [topic] => 13 [informant] => eatfresh22 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 30 [ratings] => 6 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

Agony's Arms

Contributed by eatfresh22 on Wednesday, 26th May 2004 @ 04:09:01 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

A picture of darkness,
Gloom, despair,
Hate and agony,
Miserable, scared.

Light blockaded
By hopeless thoughts.
Doomed to distress,
Bitterly fought.

Throbbing anguish,
Screaming grief,
Thrashing torment,
Fleeing relief.

Silent desperation
Tragic affliction
Terrible mortification
Deathly depression.

Merciless pain
Ferocious feelings
Leave me raw
In search of healing.

There's consciousness
Of light inside.
How long in darkness
Will I reside?

Copyright Â© eatfresh22 ... [ 2004-05-26 16:09:01]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Agony's Arms (User Rating: 1 )
by Fionndruinne on Wednesday, 26th May 2004 @ 04:14:55 PM AEST
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Carrie, how dare you feel down? I forbid it! Now get back to being happy.
Very vivid picture here. Well done, Meldë.
Andrew

Re: Agony's Arms (User Rating: 1 )
by setting_in_the_sun on Wednesday, 26th May 2004 @ 04:16:25 PM AEST
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Damn. I'm knowing this feeling about now...but yeah. The words you chose gave this peice a very deep feel, and everything about it is awesome, Loving these lines:

"Throbbing anguish,
Screaming grief,
Thrashing torment,
Fleeing relief."

Terrific- Keep up the great work -n- take care.

Stephanie

Re: Agony's Arms (User Rating: 1 )
by sweetangeluk on Wednesday, 26th May 2004 @ 06:22:10 PM AEST
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Really powerful poem

Great write

Been there felt that hope you feel better soon
Take care

Love SweetAngelukxxxx

Re: Agony's Arms (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Thursday, 27th May 2004 @ 12:15:15 AM AEST
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fantastico!

Re: Agony's Arms (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Thursday, 27th May 2004 @ 09:30:13 AM AEST
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Brilliantly written, sorry to hear that you are feeling so down ((((HUGS))))

5+++++ Great poem,

pixie xx

Re: Agony's Arms (User Rating: 1 )
by liquidsunshine on Thursday, 27th May 2004 @ 04:15:47 PM AEST
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Oh, don't worry, the Lord will pull you through and you're in "darkness" for a reason that only He really knows. Honestly, I dont think it matters whether or not we understand why. The only one that needs to know why anything is how it is? Him. He's got a purpose and you'll understand once you reach heaven. I know you'll be alright.
Great poem though.
Bravo, encore with that pen and paper.
Love,
Chelsea

Re: Agony's Arms (User Rating: 1 )
by lovingcritters on Monday, 31st May 2004 @ 07:17:15 PM AEST
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WELCOME ABOARD TO YOU! You will love it here with us on YPDC. And want to say a big thanks to you, for all the nice comments you've left on my poems. I finally found you. I have you in my favorites now.....so watch out....I can comment frequently!
This was a very good poem, and you definitely have talent.
I'm so sorry you are down, or perhaps just having a bag day.
I will send you some Wyoming Sunshine......with lots of hugs.
Lovingcritters
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