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Array ( [sid] => 48965 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => One Last Dance [time] => 2004-05-24 21:08:59 [hometext] => What more can I say? Diana, I want you back, and I'll keep writing until that happens, or until my tears dry up, and leave me to fade. I love you too much to let go. I CAN'T LET GO! Comments are fine, just don't pity me. [bodytext] => I’ve written a thousand letters
But I can’t send them to you
You’ve made your final decision
We’re over, we’re done, we’re through.

I’ve asked for too many chances
That left me with one last goodbye
A big part of me will be gone now
The rest draining out as I cry.

I’ll never be able to move on
At least not in ways of the heart
I left that with you as a memory
No use to me broken apart.

I’ve cried out a thousand teardrops
There’s just not much left of me
I’m fighting, but fading out slowly
There’s only one light I can see.

The light of your mind maybe changing
The slight hope of one more chance
To save the love we’re both losing
Our love that deserves One Last Dance.

A love that we both yet agree on
But knowing there has to be more
My eyes somehow opened too late
But they’re opened like never before.

I’m trying to bury, past bad days
But I don’t mean, I’ll to try to forget
I’ll keep them to learn from my heartache
The mistakes, and my greatest regret.

The light in your eyes maybe changing
The last hope of one last chance
To save the life we’re both losing
Our love that deserves One Last Dance.

They say time will heal all wounds
But can it hide all of the pain?
Can it bring our lives back together?
Or will this end always remain?

The light in your heart maybe changing
The last breath of one last chance
To save that light we’re both losing
For love that deserves One Last Dance. [comments] => 1 [counter] => 180 [topic] => 22 [informant] => Joker17 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 14 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )
One Last Dance

Contributed by Joker17 on Monday, 24th May 2004 @ 09:08:59 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove



I’ve written a thousand letters
But I can’t send them to you
You’ve made your final decision
We’re over, we’re done, we’re through.

I’ve asked for too many chances
That left me with one last goodbye
A big part of me will be gone now
The rest draining out as I cry.

I’ll never be able to move on
At least not in ways of the heart
I left that with you as a memory
No use to me broken apart.

I’ve cried out a thousand teardrops
There’s just not much left of me
I’m fighting, but fading out slowly
There’s only one light I can see.

The light of your mind maybe changing
The slight hope of one more chance
To save the love we’re both losing
Our love that deserves One Last Dance.

A love that we both yet agree on
But knowing there has to be more
My eyes somehow opened too late
But they’re opened like never before.

I’m trying to bury, past bad days
But I don’t mean, I’ll to try to forget
I’ll keep them to learn from my heartache
The mistakes, and my greatest regret.

The light in your eyes maybe changing
The last hope of one last chance
To save the life we’re both losing
Our love that deserves One Last Dance.

They say time will heal all wounds
But can it hide all of the pain?
Can it bring our lives back together?
Or will this end always remain?

The light in your heart maybe changing
The last breath of one last chance
To save that light we’re both losing
For love that deserves One Last Dance.




Copyright © Joker17 ... [ 2004-05-24 21:08:59]
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Re: One Last Dance (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Monday, 24th May 2004 @ 09:48:34 PM AEST
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beautiful expression of feelings, if i was given a poem like this i would certainly rethink my relationship with you, lol, it flows perfectly and is simply lovely:) hugs n' love nessa

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