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Array ( [sid] => 48889 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Fallen Tears [time] => 2004-05-24 09:43:59 [hometext] => I wrote this for my girl friend because she always threatened so im trying to say you go i go [bodytext] => As i listen im in so much pain
it hurts so much im going insane
they told me you killed your self
for certian reasons to be unknown
i know the reasons because they always shown
you were never happy
even with me you still thought it
family hating you
friends leaving you
you always told me "me too"
i never under stood it
but i had reasons to doubt
but tonight you had died
and its to late i already found out
i wish i could of told you
that i loved you very much
but i dont have to worry
soon i can feel your touch
even if it means taking my own life
i want us to be together
as i write my ltter to all my family and friends
i cant help but to show my tears
knowing we will be together again
signed with my heart
sealed with a kiss
written with love
always will be missed
pen touches paper
fallen tears meet with skin
after tonight we'll be together again [comments] => 2 [counter] => 175 [topic] => 32 [informant] => alwys2nv [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )
Fallen Tears

Contributed by alwys2nv on Monday, 24th May 2004 @ 09:43:59 AM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry



As i listen im in so much pain
it hurts so much im going insane
they told me you killed your self
for certian reasons to be unknown
i know the reasons because they always shown
you were never happy
even with me you still thought it
family hating you
friends leaving you
you always told me "me too"
i never under stood it
but i had reasons to doubt
but tonight you had died
and its to late i already found out
i wish i could of told you
that i loved you very much
but i dont have to worry
soon i can feel your touch
even if it means taking my own life
i want us to be together
as i write my ltter to all my family and friends
i cant help but to show my tears
knowing we will be together again
signed with my heart
sealed with a kiss
written with love
always will be missed
pen touches paper
fallen tears meet with skin
after tonight we'll be together again




Copyright © alwys2nv ... [ 2004-05-24 09:43:59]
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Re: Fallen Tears (User Rating: 1 )
by TheRaven on Monday, 24th May 2004 @ 09:51:05 AM AEST
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Off beat on a couple parts, but really good message. Good job keep it up...

The Raven


Re: Fallen Tears (User Rating: 1 )
by lostinmyself on Monday, 24th May 2004 @ 09:53:58 AM AEST
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thats so sad...please think about things before you do anything. good write. phil xxx




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