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Array ( [sid] => 48877 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => you think your funny [time] => 2004-05-24 06:27:59 [hometext] => i used to write love poems, untill my gf cheated on me [bodytext] => i am being ripped from the outside in
im smothered in eternal sin
im being pulled into the darkness within
im covered with a blissfull whim
do you think youre funny?
making fun of my face?
dont you see that you are hurting me
how about you kill me just in case.

Your day will come, and then
i will be laughing just for fun.
just remember that you deserve this feeling more than me, my former darling.
do you think youre funny?
making fun of my hurt?
to me you are nothing....
nothing more than dirt

if you wanted it to end,
you shouldnt have cheated on me, you know
you shouldnt have phoned and then
told me it was over... why couldnt you tell me to my face you wimp? HAVE FUN ***** YOUR PIMP [comments] => 4 [counter] => 200 [topic] => 6 [informant] => kritic_killer [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 12 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => AngryPoetry )

you think your funny

Contributed by kritic_killer on Monday, 24th May 2004 @ 06:27:59 AM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

i am being ripped from the outside in
im smothered in eternal sin
im being pulled into the darkness within
im covered with a blissfull whim
do you think youre funny?
making fun of my face?
dont you see that you are hurting me
how about you kill me just in case.

Your day will come, and then
i will be laughing just for fun.
just remember that you deserve this feeling more than me, my former darling.
do you think youre funny?
making fun of my hurt?
to me you are nothing....
nothing more than dirt

if you wanted it to end,
you shouldnt have cheated on me, you know
you shouldnt have phoned and then
told me it was over... why couldnt you tell me to my face you wimp? HAVE FUN ***** YOUR PIMP

Copyright © kritic_killer ... [ 2004-05-24 06:27:59]
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Re: you think your funny (User Rating: 1 )
by Another_Dimension on Monday, 24th May 2004 @ 06:30:58 AM AEST
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GO ON LAD! :) nice write keep em' comin son :P x

Re: you think your funny (User Rating: 1 )
by lostinmyself on Monday, 24th May 2004 @ 07:27:25 AM AEST
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wow, angry..i really wouldnt like to be your ex at this moment. i prefer the start to the end. dont worry you'll find someone else. phil xxx

Re: you think your funny (User Rating: 1 )
by JT on Monday, 24th May 2004 @ 08:04:10 AM AEST
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lots of hurt and anger. nice write.
pretty well controlled, till the end, understandable tho
-jt-

Re: you think your funny (User Rating: 1 )
by kittie30 on Monday, 24th May 2004 @ 04:26:52 PM AEST
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damn that was good and i am very sorry that that happend to u man well good luck

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