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Array ( [sid] => 48843 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => (emotions are sorrow) [time] => 2004-05-23 22:23:49 [hometext] => [bodytext] => So here i sit again staring; again
here i sit, this
gets more redundant
every time.

Slouched in this chair, my
eyelids half open, I
wish for obliteration, this
gets more redundant
every time.

What did you do today?
[I played Vice City for nine hours.]
Is that all you did all day?
[No. I took a break to play on the computer
for several hours...]
So... you just played video games...?
[No. I slept for a few hours, then stared listlessly
into space
slouched in this chair, my
eyelids half open, I
wish for obliteration, this
gets more redundant
every time...

It is very hot today.
[I don't care.]
A day in the life of a broiling turkey, eh?
[I suppose.]
You know, you seem like one
who has difficulty finding the beauty and joy
that exists in the world.
[Ah. that's really great. 'Scuse me whilst i take a second to actually give a *****.]

breath is shallow
head in hands, i sit
(and i stare)
no more words, this is over,
this is done,
(i don't care)

Beneath the ocean, on the sand I lie,
waiting, awaiting...

...Nevermore will I feel...

(emotions are sorrow)

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(emotions are sorrow)

Contributed by SensitiveSoAbused on Sunday, 23rd May 2004 @ 10:23:49 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

So here i sit again staring; again
here i sit, this
gets more redundant
every time.

Slouched in this chair, my
eyelids half open, I
wish for obliteration, this
gets more redundant
every time.

What did you do today?
[I played Vice City for nine hours.]
Is that all you did all day?
[No. I took a break to play on the computer
for several hours...]
So... you just played video games...?
[No. I slept for a few hours, then stared listlessly
into space
slouched in this chair, my
eyelids half open, I
wish for obliteration, this
gets more redundant
every time...

It is very hot today.
[I don't care.]
A day in the life of a broiling turkey, eh?
[I suppose.]
You know, you seem like one
who has difficulty finding the beauty and joy
that exists in the world.
[Ah. that's really great. 'Scuse me whilst i take a second to actually give a *****.]

breath is shallow
head in hands, i sit
(and i stare)
no more words, this is over,
this is done,
(i don't care)

Beneath the ocean, on the sand I lie,
waiting, awaiting...

...Nevermore will I feel...

(emotions are sorrow)

Copyright © SensitiveSoAbused ... [ 2004-05-23 22:23:49]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: (emotions are sorrow) (User Rating: 1 )
by brigitte7735 on Sunday, 23rd May 2004 @ 10:30:47 PM AEST
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Genius, i love the way this is set up.

Vanessa

Re: (emotions are sorrow) (User Rating: 1 )
by waos on Sunday, 23rd May 2004 @ 10:50:15 PM AEST
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sa-weet is all i can say. i loved it so much! awesome

Re: (emotions are sorrow) (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Sunday, 23rd May 2004 @ 11:29:51 PM AEST
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breathtaking:) hugs n' love nessa

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Re: (emotions are sorrow) (User Rating: 1 )
by secretwind on Monday, 24th May 2004 @ 02:37:46 AM AEST
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Interesting....good flow and as someone already said good setup.

Re: (emotions are sorrow) (User Rating: 1 )
by Tinkkerbelle on Monday, 24th May 2004 @ 02:58:58 PM AEST
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Absolutely beautiful poem. Amazing.

Re: (emotions are sorrow) (User Rating: 1 )
by afraid_of_fear on Monday, 24th May 2004 @ 03:09:03 PM AEST
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this had me awestruck.. i love the way you present your poems, they're so original and so beautiful.. i loved this one.. can very much relate..
charlotte x_x_x

Re: (emotions are sorrow) (User Rating: 1 )
by Another_Dimension on Tuesday, 25th May 2004 @ 11:55:14 AM AEST
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You told me you hated this... You must really hate my poems, you're amazing!! *****in amazin... x

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