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Why did this happen? It wasnt suppose to? I

was suppose to be single and happy until

that day I saw you. You gave me this look

that caught my eye, and just being friends

isn't keeping me satisified. Why did you

come up to me if you had a girl, why do you

give me this look like you want me in your

world? Why did I start to like you and have

you on my mind. Why can't I be her? Why can't

you be mine? From the second week of school

I already knew. Throughout the whole school

year I was going to be feeling you. Why

can't this be easy and not be so hard? Why

can't I not fall for the cutest out of all?

Why you out of thousands in this school? My

head wanted to make the final verdict but my

heart over ruled.


[comments] => 4 [counter] => 212 [topic] => 43 [informant] => TiNyOnE [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )
Why you

Contributed by TiNyOnE on Thursday, 10th October 2002 @ 02:30:00 PM in AEST
Topic: oops




Why did this happen? It wasnt suppose to? I

was suppose to be single and happy until

that day I saw you. You gave me this look

that caught my eye, and just being friends

isn't keeping me satisified. Why did you

come up to me if you had a girl, why do you

give me this look like you want me in your

world? Why did I start to like you and have

you on my mind. Why can't I be her? Why can't

you be mine? From the second week of school

I already knew. Throughout the whole school

year I was going to be feeling you. Why

can't this be easy and not be so hard? Why

can't I not fall for the cutest out of all?

Why you out of thousands in this school? My

head wanted to make the final verdict but my

heart over ruled.






Copyright © TiNyOnE ... [ 2002-10-10 14:30:00]
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Re: Why you (User Rating: 1 )
by MisterRight on Thursday, 10th October 2002 @ 02:48:01 PM AEST
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Oh My God!!! This is a great poem... if you replaced all the "girls" with "guys" and all the "hers" with "hims" and "school" to "work" this poem is damn close to my life. Great write!

Curtis


Re: Why you (User Rating: 1 )
by TiNyOnE on Monday, 14th October 2002 @ 09:22:01 AM AEST
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Thank you very much. your the first person to every respond to my poem. thanks


Re: Why you (User Rating: 1 )
by RealCrystal on Saturday, 1st February 2003 @ 08:49:34 PM AEST
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This is such a great poem, spoken from the heart, and I know cause Ive been in that exact same situation. Well that was before I looked around and found out there is always someone better staring at you from around the corner.


Re: Why you (User Rating: 1 )
by Shabby on Monday, 19th May 2003 @ 05:49:48 AM AEST
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takes me back to high school...you nailed all the emotions in this poem....good job




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