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By: Danielle

Then it started raining on me
I was gasping for what was not air
But love
as it turned to vapor
I had it in me for only a while
Then it left without any warning
I was laying on an empty cold sheeted bed
It was all inside my head
I had nothing but the feeling that I was dead
Lost, gone, alone
It was all inside my head
That I was in love
You were claiming me as I was yours
Through and through I wander
In my mind I ponder
My thoughts
And I can’t seem to let them go
You were the first one I truly cared about
But I ask myself if I can live without
But
Its all inside my head
All the thoughts
That I cant forget
All the nights with you
Was something I was use to
Why was it hurting like this
Losing all the bliss
All those nights I let go
I’m starting to miss
Driving by
all the questions that begin with why
I let you go
It’s a saying; if you love something
Set it free
If it comes back
It was meant to be
I’ve got no trouble with that
But will you really come back?
It’s all inside my head
That I’m in love
People tell me I look like I am all the time
It’s just a front
Its something I hide from you everyday
Hoping it wont show
It will fade away
It’s not
All inside my head [comments] => 10 [counter] => 280 [topic] => 2 [informant] => Living_In_My_Dream [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 19 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

All Inside my head

Contributed by Living_In_My_Dream on Friday, 21st May 2004 @ 08:21:00 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

"All inside my Head"
By: Danielle

Then it started raining on me
I was gasping for what was not air
But love
as it turned to vapor
I had it in me for only a while
Then it left without any warning
I was laying on an empty cold sheeted bed
It was all inside my head
I had nothing but the feeling that I was dead
Lost, gone, alone
It was all inside my head
That I was in love
You were claiming me as I was yours
Through and through I wander
In my mind I ponder
My thoughts
And I can’t seem to let them go
You were the first one I truly cared about
But I ask myself if I can live without
But
Its all inside my head
All the thoughts
That I cant forget
All the nights with you
Was something I was use to
Why was it hurting like this
Losing all the bliss
All those nights I let go
I’m starting to miss
Driving by
all the questions that begin with why
I let you go
It’s a saying; if you love something
Set it free
If it comes back
It was meant to be
I’ve got no trouble with that
But will you really come back?
It’s all inside my head
That I’m in love
People tell me I look like I am all the time
It’s just a front
Its something I hide from you everyday
Hoping it wont show
It will fade away
It’s not
All inside my head

Copyright Â© Living_In_My_Dream ... [ 2004-05-21 20:21:00]
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Re: All Inside my head (User Rating: 1 )
by holderofthestone on Friday, 21st May 2004 @ 08:28:49 PM AEST
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wow... i really feel you on this. I feel the same way for a girl i know... to bad she doesnt see it

Re: All Inside my head (User Rating: 1 )
by Silent-No-More on Friday, 21st May 2004 @ 08:40:14 PM AEST
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I'm with holder.... I feel/hear you, definately. Anyone that's been there will recognize this feeling. A nice piece!

Re: All Inside my head (User Rating: 1 )
by EvaRee on Friday, 28th May 2004 @ 01:46:34 PM AEST
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Beautifully done....i can relate. You have a lot of talent. good work
Eva

Re: All Inside my head (User Rating: 1 )
by Randibee85 on Thursday, 3rd June 2004 @ 12:47:17 PM AEST
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AWESOME, you really showed it all and quite clearly. I love it. :>

~Randi

Re: All Inside my head (User Rating: 1 )
by Randibee85 on Thursday, 3rd June 2004 @ 12:48:05 PM AEST
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BTW, I loved it so much that I gave it a 5.

Re: All Inside my head (User Rating: 1 )
by InnerBeautyQueen on Saturday, 5th June 2004 @ 01:06:12 AM AEST
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aww... this seems so sad and so sweet all at once! way good job!

Re: All Inside my head (User Rating: 1 )
by secretwind on Saturday, 5th June 2004 @ 02:15:33 AM AEST
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Excellent...The flows that come from you are so sad but so true.

The Wind......

Re: All Inside my head (User Rating: 1 )
by rugby_player on Saturday, 5th June 2004 @ 09:19:42 AM AEST
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Hey first of all thanks for the comment on my poem. You are a much better writter then i am. It was great keep up the good work. P.S. If you would like to keep in touch e-mail me

Re: All Inside my head (User Rating: 1 )
by Rakerman1999 on Saturday, 5th June 2004 @ 11:06:03 AM AEST
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Love is a very hard thing to hold on to my friend. This is sooo sad .
Very well done
Larry

Re: All Inside my head (User Rating: 1 )
by freespirit on Saturday, 19th June 2004 @ 02:05:15 PM AEST
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well written good job
God bless

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