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Filled with love, and filled with fright, watch as your soul is lifted from the light.
Watch me rise from this pool of blood, with arms stretched out, And palms facing up.
Body covered in a crimson red, and the smell of death as I raise my head.
Mouth opens wide, and marbled fangs start to shine,
And eyes as black as night, cut deep inside your mind.
Don't run little one, for we're about to have some fun.
Come to me, and let me feed, for I'll give you a life to last throughout all eternity.
Now tilt your head to the right, as I sink my teeth into your heavenly life.
Feel the pain as your body grows weak, then feel the ecsatsy,
As your life has been tweaked.
Feel the blood burn as it runs through your veins,
Now release yourself from heavens ball and chain, then rise up to me,
For there is no more pain.
Now walk with me out into the darkened mist, and drink the blood from my wrist.
Welcome to this life of crimson, and lifes whole new system.
Go now child into the night, and claim another soul for your new life.
Take as much as you want, for there is no greed.
Just be sure to plant another crimson seed.

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Another Crimson Seed

Contributed by Rylo on Wednesday, 19th May 2004 @ 09:44:30 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

I wish I may, I wish I might take someones soul tonight.
Filled with love, and filled with fright, watch as your soul is lifted from the light.
Watch me rise from this pool of blood, with arms stretched out, And palms facing up.
Body covered in a crimson red, and the smell of death as I raise my head.
Mouth opens wide, and marbled fangs start to shine,
And eyes as black as night, cut deep inside your mind.
Don't run little one, for we're about to have some fun.
Come to me, and let me feed, for I'll give you a life to last throughout all eternity.
Now tilt your head to the right, as I sink my teeth into your heavenly life.
Feel the pain as your body grows weak, then feel the ecsatsy,
As your life has been tweaked.
Feel the blood burn as it runs through your veins,
Now release yourself from heavens ball and chain, then rise up to me,
For there is no more pain.
Now walk with me out into the darkened mist, and drink the blood from my wrist.
Welcome to this life of crimson, and lifes whole new system.
Go now child into the night, and claim another soul for your new life.
Take as much as you want, for there is no greed.
Just be sure to plant another crimson seed.

Copyright © Rylo ... [ 2004-05-19 21:44:30]
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Re: Another Crimson Seed (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Wednesday, 19th May 2004 @ 09:52:04 PM AEST
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nice. And eyes as black as night, cut deep inside your mind.

Re: Another Crimson Seed (User Rating: 1 )
by AnGeL_M on Wednesday, 19th May 2004 @ 09:53:06 PM AEST
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Oh Hun This One Rocks !!!!!!!! Loved It :-)
You Have An Amazing Talent In The Dark Side Of Poetry !!!!!!! Keep Em Coming....
LoVe - AnGeL

Re: Another Crimson Seed (User Rating: 1 )
by blueheart on Wednesday, 19th May 2004 @ 09:56:40 PM AEST
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My goodness, this is one of the best dark poems I've read. Very very graphic, I could literally see the blood you've described from where you emerged. Intense and chilling.

Re: Another Crimson Seed (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 19th May 2004 @ 10:40:57 PM AEST
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Excellent write. One of the best I have read.
Still don't like them! lol

Rita

Re: Another Crimson Seed (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Thursday, 20th May 2004 @ 09:34:48 AM AEST
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chills chills and more chills ahhhhh Ron good thing Im reading this in the daylight!
Michelle

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