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Array ( [sid] => 48152 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Not One Of Us!!!! [time] => 2004-05-18 21:08:59 [hometext] => This is to that idiot who gives nasty comments but not a name....... [bodytext] =>
I wanna say
that you
you are a moron
for the things
you've been say to us,
we're all just flowing
painting pictures
and you're a Demon
not one of us.
If i could get ya
smash into little pieces
chase you back into that
darkness
where you hide
where there's no laughter
better run
cause you i'm after.
You can never
be
one of us,
no never ever
be
one of us!!!!!
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Not One Of Us!!!!

Contributed by secretwind on Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 09:08:59 PM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

I wanna say
that you
you are a moron
for the things
you've been say to us,
we're all just flowing
painting pictures
and you're a Demon
not one of us.
If i could get ya
smash into little pieces
chase you back into that
darkness
where you hide
where there's no laughter
better run
cause you i'm after.
You can never
be
one of us,
no never ever
be
one of us!!!!!

Copyright © secretwind ... [ 2004-05-18 21:08:59]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Not One Of Us!!!! (User Rating: 1 )
by Katie2008 on Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 09:16:12 PM AEST
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LMAO! I liked it! Way to tell whoever it was off! Great work!
Katie

Re: Not One Of Us!!!! (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 10:00:20 PM AEST
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this even made me angry. ahh!

Re: Not One Of Us!!!! (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 10:40:20 PM AEST
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well, they cant do it anymore because mick made it so everyone has to sign in to comment, theres a forum too:) great vent poem, hugs n' love nessa

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Re: Not One Of Us!!!! (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 10:57:16 PM AEST
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Haaa, U tell um darlin and I sit here and pat my foot.........
fortunatly I haven't been attaked my the demon yet. Course If I had to retailiate I'd have to put my write in the special sectioon 'cause my words wouldn't be suitable to children.
Good write.
luv, huggs, ssmiles,
emy

Re: Not One Of Us!!!! (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Friday, 21st May 2004 @ 12:01:47 AM AEST
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Wow..I'd sure hate to get on your bad side....
:>)
Jenni

Re: Not One Of Us!!!! (User Rating: 1 )
by AliB on Friday, 21st May 2004 @ 05:19:53 PM AEST
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Good vent. I agree, 2 fingers to whoever you are.........coward!!!!
Most of us agree with you, thanks for saying what we're all thinking.

Ali xx

Re: Not One Of Us!!!! (User Rating: 1 )
by Dawny on Monday, 24th May 2004 @ 05:03:10 PM AEST
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This is great, it said what we all think, and said it well.

Love Dawny x

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