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Array ( [sid] => 48066 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Critifiably Crazy [time] => 2004-05-18 13:41:06 [hometext] => I wrote this this morning when my grandma told me to stay away from my friend because he's (Certifiably Crazy) and (Scum of the Earth) [bodytext] => I got pulled into her office today
and she told me to stay away from you
because you're (Certifiably Crazy)
and you're (Scum of the Earth)
and I can't talk to you anymore
and that hurts me so bad
because you're like my brother
and I don't want to hurt you
and you're never (Crazy) around me
you're perfectly sane
they just don't understand [comments] => 10 [counter] => 1031 [topic] => 6 [informant] => kailadragon [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 16 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => AngryPoetry )

Critifiably Crazy

Contributed by kailadragon on Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 01:41:06 PM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

I got pulled into her office today
and she told me to stay away from you
because you're (Certifiably Crazy)
and you're (Scum of the Earth)
and I can't talk to you anymore
and that hurts me so bad
because you're like my brother
and I don't want to hurt you
and you're never (Crazy) around me
you're perfectly sane
they just don't understand

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Re: Critifiably Crazy (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 02:29:48 PM AEST
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hey girl......dont worry it will be all right in the end.
-callie

Re: Critifiably Crazy (User Rating: 1 )
by Remy on Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 03:36:31 PM AEST
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mheh... oh geez, my friend has the same problem - but i'm the devil-spawn her folks don't want around!!! augh, i feel the huirt in this, really i do. umm... patience anyone? yegh...
~Remy~

Re: Critifiably Crazy (User Rating: 1 )
by slackoffsamiam on Tuesday, 15th June 2004 @ 04:33:04 PM AEST
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thats most of my friends right there

Re: Critifiably Crazy (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 8th November 2004 @ 11:02:08 AM AEST
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How tragic. This is a sad poem. To tuch it up try using less of (and), other than that well done.

Re: Critifiably Crazy (User Rating: 1 )
by HorizonGirl on Wednesday, 9th March 2005 @ 02:17:27 AM AEST
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I sorry to hear that, but I been there more then once just hang in there girl this to will pass.

Re: Critifiably Crazy (User Rating: 1 )
by Dorkfish on Thursday, 9th June 2005 @ 04:39:11 PM AEST
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It's not so much poetic as it is you recalling what you're grandmother said. Try you make it come from your heart more. Speak of how you feel not giving exact lines from the conversation. You havee potential with all the aggression towards your grandmother just try to let the emotions come out instaed of just venting your anger. Sorry about your friend.

Re: Critifiably Crazy (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Monday, 12th September 2005 @ 06:59:26 PM AEST
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I think there is no other way to say this. If some one tried to tell me who they wanted to be my friends I would tell them to mind their own business!

You have written a good poem about your friendship.

Re: Critifiably Crazy (User Rating: 1 )
by hardrocker15198916 on Friday, 23rd September 2005 @ 02:08:43 PM AEST
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i hate people who think they have the right to control your life
thats just BS
well
nice write
i hope alls well and ends well

Re: Critifiably Crazy (User Rating: 1 )
by princess_of_pain on Tuesday, 17th January 2006 @ 10:15:00 PM AEST
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:( thats so sad!! dont worry, it will all work out in the end

stay strong, and good luck

great poem by the way

Re: Critifiably Crazy (User Rating: 1 )
by Man_On_High on Wednesday, 19th April 2006 @ 08:05:54 PM AEST
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parents..especially grandparents..
have a difficult time understanding younger generations..
I feel ya-

great write..

B

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