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[aid] => mick
[title] => wearing indigo
[time] => 2004-05-15 23:57:45
[hometext] => sometimes, you need to slowly back away from your puter and walk out; and breathe....
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i shall describe this night to you; as
flickering bits of starshine break through,
between peaks; great moisture clings to air
home; silence loudly visibly incompare - ably,
leaves, are
laughing blackened silhouettes moving on
when eyes adjust and heart finds calm,
upon earthen shapes; crickets song on the go
outside the night is darkly cool; wearing indigo.
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wearing indigo
Contributed by
ladyfawn
on
Saturday, 15th May 2004 @ 11:57:45 PM in AEST
Topic:
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i shall describe this night to you; as
flickering bits of starshine break through,
between peaks; great moisture clings to air
home; silence loudly visibly incompare - ably,
leaves, are
laughing blackened silhouettes moving on
when eyes adjust and heart finds calm,
upon earthen shapes; crickets song on the go
outside the night is darkly cool; wearing indigo.
§* *§
*|*
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Re: wearing indigo
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by thumper on
Sunday, 16th May 2004 @ 12:36:06 AM AEST
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oooohhhhhh! So nice Ladyfawn. Very nice imagery. And the pic helps too. You did a great job on this one!! SIGH. Write on!!
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Re: wearing indigo
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by JT on
Sunday, 16th May 2004 @ 01:40:55 AM AEST
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| A world apart. Thankyou for taking me there. Great write |
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Re: wearing indigo
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 16th May 2004 @ 08:12:46 AM AEST
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The last stanza has a beautiful rhythm to it.
Very enjoyable read. |
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Re: wearing indigo
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by Rakerman1999 on
Sunday, 16th May 2004 @ 08:38:02 AM AEST
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I couldnt agree more with you ness.
This was calming and beautiful. Thank you
Roses
Larry |
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Re: wearing indigo
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by Lone_er on
Sunday, 16th May 2004 @ 09:07:58 AM AEST
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| Wonerfully and delightfully done maam...Russ |
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Re: wearing indigo
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 16th May 2004 @ 12:14:05 PM AEST
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This is brilliant hun. Masterfully written and the picture is simply beautiful.
Hugs 'n Love
- Becca |
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Re: wearing indigo
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by shelby on
Sunday, 16th May 2004 @ 12:58:51 PM AEST
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Nessa so peaceful and beautiful I can see it in my minds eye nothing better than a beautiful star filled night.
Michelle |
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Re: wearing indigo
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by emystar on
Sunday, 16th May 2004 @ 03:27:31 PM AEST
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Heavenly beautifull write.
Luv the graphics too.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: wearing indigo
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by Merry on
Sunday, 16th May 2004 @ 03:50:52 PM AEST
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i feel like i have been to the mountain and see what you see - beautiful
hugs
merry |
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Re: wearing indigo
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by Cynthia on
Sunday, 16th May 2004 @ 08:23:02 PM AEST
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| Oooo Nessa, this was really nice. Very vivid picture you have painted here. I like the pic as well. *S* Cynthia |
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Re: wearing indigo
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by AnGeL_M on
Sunday, 16th May 2004 @ 08:42:37 PM AEST
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Oh Nessa What An Outstanding Marvelous Write Here !!!!!!
Loved It Very Enjoyable Read Very Vivid Picture Indeed :-) Keep Em Coming G/F Love ,Hugs
********LoVe**AnGeL*********
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Re: wearing indigo
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by Jenni_K on
Sunday, 16th May 2004 @ 11:05:06 PM AEST
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Awesome write!!! Beautiful imagery!!
Hugs
Jenni |
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Re: wearing indigo
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by venkat on
Monday, 17th May 2004 @ 12:06:42 AM AEST
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| night described with wondrous beauty..lovely write..thank you for sharing the beauty of nature:-) venkat |
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Re: wearing indigo
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by arden on
Monday, 17th May 2004 @ 03:06:26 PM AEST
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wow! i loved this one.
the imagery was so stunningly beautiful. how do you do it?
i am just amazed. perfectly done.
Arden |
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Re: wearing indigo
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by Archie on
Monday, 31st May 2004 @ 05:40:20 AM AEST
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| This is an awesome poem and as always you have a surprising picture to bring it even more meaning. |
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Re: wearing indigo
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 11th June 2004 @ 07:37:22 PM AEST
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| I love this one Nessa, the words slip around and then through me...feels good. |
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Re: wearing indigo
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by hauntedscorp on
Monday, 24th November 2014 @ 09:31:23 PM AEST
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Soo beautiful sounding. Peaceful. Nature is good for the soul, and your home sounds like an enchanting place.
~Scorp |
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