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Array ( [sid] => 4760 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The Deceiver [time] => 2002-10-08 14:20:00 [hometext] => [bodytext] => You're stirring up sweet memories
of the past,
but with that sweetness
comes a sadness.

Though it no longer exists,
there used to be a feeling,
a feeling of wanting something,
but I never received it.

I no longer need
or desire it,
but what's come about
has reminded me of it.

A smile emerges on my face-
looking as happy as can be,
but it's really just entwined
with a certain hate,
maybe even jealousy.

It's not mine to have,
I don't even want it anymore,
but what you've done
is cold and unfair.

It's like breaking an unwritten law,
and you've proved to me
that you have no feelings at all.

I don't care to make
a fuss out of this,
or cry and whine
and throw a fit-
it's really not such
a horrible thing,
but it stings me
just a tiny bit.

I'll be fine,
this embitterment will only last
for a short time-
but you must see,
what you've done has
brought up a sadness in me.

If you're truly blind
to what I feel,
then you really are
what I've always thought...

I've never trusted
or deeply cared for you,
and now I never will.

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The Deceiver

Contributed by Vampy on Tuesday, 8th October 2002 @ 02:20:00 PM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

You're stirring up sweet memories
of the past,
but with that sweetness
comes a sadness.

Though it no longer exists,
there used to be a feeling,
a feeling of wanting something,
but I never received it.

I no longer need
or desire it,
but what's come about
has reminded me of it.

A smile emerges on my face-
looking as happy as can be,
but it's really just entwined
with a certain hate,
maybe even jealousy.

It's not mine to have,
I don't even want it anymore,
but what you've done
is cold and unfair.

It's like breaking an unwritten law,
and you've proved to me
that you have no feelings at all.

I don't care to make
a fuss out of this,
or cry and whine
and throw a fit-
it's really not such
a horrible thing,
but it stings me
just a tiny bit.

I'll be fine,
this embitterment will only last
for a short time-
but you must see,
what you've done has
brought up a sadness in me.

If you're truly blind
to what I feel,
then you really are
what I've always thought...

I've never trusted
or deeply cared for you,
and now I never will.

Copyright © Vampy ... [ 2002-10-08 14:20:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: The Deceiver (User Rating: 1 )
by chatabox on Tuesday, 8th October 2002 @ 09:47:28 PM AEST
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Sounds like you were well out of this, but the only trouble we cant tell out heart not to hurt can we.

Lovely write this.

Re: The Deceiver (User Rating: 1 )
by frozensuicide on Thursday, 21st November 2002 @ 05:53:27 AM AEST
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oooh i like this. its awesomely written. your good! well, i have to go. but have a nice day!

Hug a moose!

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