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Array ( [sid] => 47549 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Razorblade [time] => 2004-05-14 19:05:16 [hometext] => I realize this poem may be hard for some people to understand........so ya. [bodytext] => I slide the blade across my wrist
And for a moment I escape reality
Nothing can touch me
Except this pain I feel
But soon after
I drown in sorrow
Realizing what I have done
Who I have hurt
Knowing what they will think of me
But I am not the attention starved child
They say I am
I only do it because I can
What else is there to do?
I've givin up on my reason why
This action is a cry from inside
An aching heart longing to let go
But once again not able to let go
So.......
I continue to cut [comments] => 4 [counter] => 188 [topic] => 61 [informant] => Bloodthirsty [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => selfstruggles )

Razorblade

Contributed by Bloodthirsty on Friday, 14th May 2004 @ 07:05:16 PM in AEST
Topic: selfstruggles

I slide the blade across my wrist
And for a moment I escape reality
Nothing can touch me
Except this pain I feel
But soon after
I drown in sorrow
Realizing what I have done
Who I have hurt
Knowing what they will think of me
But I am not the attention starved child
They say I am
I only do it because I can
What else is there to do?
I've givin up on my reason why
This action is a cry from inside
An aching heart longing to let go
But once again not able to let go
So.......
I continue to cut

Copyright © Bloodthirsty ... [ 2004-05-14 19:05:16]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Razorblade (User Rating: 1 )
by waos on Friday, 14th May 2004 @ 07:20:19 PM AEST
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*hugs* good work there. I know what you feel like when you write that I think. At least the part where people accuse you of being attention seeking. That's one reason I hide my scars...so people realize that's not why I do it. We do it cause we can. And cause it helps.

Sweet job putting it into words. Keep it up.

Re: Razorblade (User Rating: 1 )
by Lessa on Friday, 14th May 2004 @ 07:30:01 PM AEST
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i understand this, i remember the feeling,
how u know u hurt other people doing it
but its like u have no choice
its that or dealing with the anxity and the panic
but u cant do that. cutting gets rid of it really fast so u can just move on, great write babe

Re: Razorblade (User Rating: 1 )
by ilimow on Friday, 14th May 2004 @ 07:31:12 PM AEST
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sober thoughts, so beautifully woven in emotions.

Liked your style.
Hoping its just a poem, not a reality.

regards
ilimow

Re: Razorblade (User Rating: 1 )
by The_Phantom on Friday, 14th May 2004 @ 08:03:34 PM AEST
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I don't find it hard to understand at all, it's how you feel inside, and so you write, great job, sometimes you just got to let it out.

The Phantom

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