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That we're ending
Together
People scattered on tables and chairs
Weeping, smiling, scribbling furiously
On each other's shirts, books... hearts
Wishing to have made an impact.
Five years together. A pentagon of strength.
Friends and foes. But none of the petty
disagreements matter anymore.
All that matters is that we are
Together.
For wanting to end on a harmonious note,
The sense of unity and understanding
Is more vibrant and intense than ever.
As memories mix with the present
It all becomes too much
I love each and every person here
And each lash is coated in deep, damp appreciation for each of them. Revelling in my joyful sorrow.
I jumped out of the rhythm
briefly to observe the picture with the beat-keeper.
We agreed it was beautiful. But transcience is beautiful too...
So I guess, in a way, I'll be glad to be starting a new symphony. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 191 [topic] => 48 [informant] => dolly_dagger [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 15 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

together

Contributed by dolly_dagger on Friday, 14th May 2004 @ 05:05:23 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Everyone's aware
That we're ending
Together
People scattered on tables and chairs
Weeping, smiling, scribbling furiously
On each other's shirts, books... hearts
Wishing to have made an impact.
Five years together. A pentagon of strength.
Friends and foes. But none of the petty
disagreements matter anymore.
All that matters is that we are
Together.
For wanting to end on a harmonious note,
The sense of unity and understanding
Is more vibrant and intense than ever.
As memories mix with the present
It all becomes too much
I love each and every person here
And each lash is coated in deep, damp appreciation for each of them. Revelling in my joyful sorrow.
I jumped out of the rhythm
briefly to observe the picture with the beat-keeper.
We agreed it was beautiful. But transcience is beautiful too...
So I guess, in a way, I'll be glad to be starting a new symphony.

Copyright © dolly_dagger ... [ 2004-05-14 17:05:23]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: together (User Rating: 1 )
by ShadowDaughter on Friday, 14th May 2004 @ 06:01:07 PM AEST
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Wow . . . the feelings you've captured in this eloquent, beautiful poem are so familiar . . . and you've captured them so well. So many little phrases you use seem to sum it all up so well-- "We agreed it was beautiful. But transcience is beautiful too..." and "Weeping, smiling, scribbling furiously
On each other's shirts, books... hearts
Wishing to have made an impact"-- just so well put. Nicely done.

--Nora

Re: together (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 14th May 2004 @ 07:09:29 PM AEST
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You should become a poetess.
I'd pay to read stuff like this - and if you're only as old as school leavers are, then you have an iridescent future awaiting you, Ms. Dagger, i'm sure in whatever you decide to do.
Only 5 stars for this, because I can't give 10, unfortunately.

Re: together (User Rating: 1 )
by Broken-glass on Saturday, 15th May 2004 @ 05:41:33 AM AEST
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It was a strange way for the ride to end, I agree. You were also right in your final words... starting the next symphony is the most exciting part! I have no regrets. Love Chris xxxxx

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