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Array ( [sid] => 47381 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Gone [time] => 2004-05-13 16:53:05 [hometext] => [bodytext] => You left me there
Sitting all alone
Sitting on those gray steps
That made me tremble
I was waiting
For what I did not know
For you to come back
And tell me that you loved me?
For an angel to come
And take the knife out of my back?
For a lightning bolt to strike me
And carry me to the devil or to god?
I turned my head to the right
That's the way you went
And that's the way you left me
I did not see you
I looked up at the sky
I did not see an angel or a lightning bolt
All I saw was the gray monster
Looking back at me
It began to rain
The rain drops blended with my tears
I turned my head to the right once more
And I thought I saw you
But it wasn't you
It was the angel
That took out the knife that once stabbed me
And healed my heart forever [comments] => 2 [counter] => 182 [topic] => 52 [informant] => _nikki_ [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => goodbyepoetry )

Gone

Contributed by _nikki_ on Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 04:53:05 PM in AEST
Topic: goodbyepoetry

You left me there
Sitting all alone
Sitting on those gray steps
That made me tremble
I was waiting
For what I did not know
For you to come back
And tell me that you loved me?
For an angel to come
And take the knife out of my back?
For a lightning bolt to strike me
And carry me to the devil or to god?
I turned my head to the right
That's the way you went
And that's the way you left me
I did not see you
I looked up at the sky
I did not see an angel or a lightning bolt
All I saw was the gray monster
Looking back at me
It began to rain
The rain drops blended with my tears
I turned my head to the right once more
And I thought I saw you
But it wasn't you
It was the angel
That took out the knife that once stabbed me
And healed my heart forever

Copyright © _nikki_ ... [ 2004-05-13 16:53:05]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Gone (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 04:59:19 PM AEST
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vivid expressions in this write you cast a lovely image upon my screen with this write. Well done

Michelle

Re: Gone (User Rating: 1 )
by lb12 on Monday, 17th May 2004 @ 03:17:41 PM AEST
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wow, i really connected with this. it wuz so deep and expressive, but just right. thanx for this, it really made me think...
-lb

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