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Array ( [sid] => 47158 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => No healing me [time] => 2004-05-12 02:02:15 [hometext] => If you like this poetry then check out my journal for more [bodytext] => No healing me Why cant you see

Im slipping out of my skin

So I don’t have to see that ***** again

I know you only see the point of my masked eternity

But how it is so easy for you to watch me bleed

I have a hole in my chest

And the cold air flows inside

My heart is stone cold ice

And nothing can shatter it

The sun came up today

For the first time in a while

I keep waking up to waste away in this empty room

No I don’t want to hear what im hearing

And no I don’t want to see what im seeing

I cant scream I cant scream

I cant see and I don’t want to think

Who is looking through my eyes?

What does she see?

Emptiness, impurity?

Sadness and frailty?

The knife is in the woman’s hands

The blood splattered floor

The little boys cry echoes throught out my mind

Everything is spinning but I hear their voices

Telling me I must survive

Must keep living for I have a purpose

But what is my purpose

The tell me to get out of bed and to keep up my strength

But I simply cannot any longer

They tell me to get up and get dressed

To walk my way to school

Build new friendships and meet new people

But they just don’t understand that there is no healing me

So what if im in therepy

So what if I seem happy

Why cant you try living in my mind for I time

Why cant you just take my words that im not healthy

Stop feeding me these pills

Shop shoving them down my throat

I wanna stop them all

Just be set free from these damn medications

Do you not understand I just want to be me

Do you not understand there is no healing me

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No healing me

Contributed by Gothik_Twitch on Wednesday, 12th May 2004 @ 02:02:15 AM in AEST
Topic: toughstuff

No healing me Why cant you see

Im slipping out of my skin

So I don’t have to see that ***** again

I know you only see the point of my masked eternity

But how it is so easy for you to watch me bleed

I have a hole in my chest

And the cold air flows inside

My heart is stone cold ice

And nothing can shatter it

The sun came up today

For the first time in a while

I keep waking up to waste away in this empty room

No I don’t want to hear what im hearing

And no I don’t want to see what im seeing

I cant scream I cant scream

I cant see and I don’t want to think

Who is looking through my eyes?

What does she see?

Emptiness, impurity?

Sadness and frailty?

The knife is in the woman’s hands

The blood splattered floor

The little boys cry echoes throught out my mind

Everything is spinning but I hear their voices

Telling me I must survive

Must keep living for I have a purpose

But what is my purpose

The tell me to get out of bed and to keep up my strength

But I simply cannot any longer

They tell me to get up and get dressed

To walk my way to school

Build new friendships and meet new people

But they just don’t understand that there is no healing me

So what if im in therepy

So what if I seem happy

Why cant you try living in my mind for I time

Why cant you just take my words that im not healthy

Stop feeding me these pills

Shop shoving them down my throat

I wanna stop them all

Just be set free from these damn medications

Do you not understand I just want to be me

Do you not understand there is no healing me

Copyright Â© Gothik_Twitch ... [ 2004-05-12 02:02:15]
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Re: No healing me (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Wednesday, 12th May 2004 @ 03:30:03 AM AEST
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I can't particularly say I like this kind of writing because it's sad but then it's reality. it's written like a pro.
I havve to take meds to survive and if the only way I can really relax is by pills then I say come on pills.
I really don't know the depths of this but it's obvious u r having some problems with who ever, but sweetie there's always hope as long as there is breath in your body but this don't make the persons that are trying to change u right.
I wish u all the best and u should be able to be who u r.
Good luck.
luv, huggs, faith, hope, peace,
emy
Very good writing.

Re: No healing me (User Rating: 1 )
by lostinmyself on Wednesday, 12th May 2004 @ 08:05:58 AM AEST
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good write. full of emotion. there is alot of pain in this. i understand it.

"My heart is stone cold ice
And nothing can shatter it"

i love that..amazing image. good write. phil xxx

Re: No healing me (User Rating: 1 )
by deadbloodyrose on Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 08:43:18 PM AEST
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i relate so well.. i use to be on a bunch of meds..eventually i dropped them myself against my doctors will.. AMI JO

Re: No healing me (User Rating: 1 )
by deathdrop on Tuesday, 3rd August 2004 @ 03:47:03 AM AEST
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every part of this is true for me apart from the part about taking pills. i don't take any. this doctor said once that he thought i might benifit, but i didn't want to... so i don't take any thing.
this is a very strong poem.
i know how you feel. if you ever want to talk, PM me. ok?
from deathdrop.

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