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I always thought it,
And wished it a lie,
I always said it,
Never ment it,
But I have seen
What your actions mean,
No one wants me here,
With every tear,
That crashes to the floor,
I'm heading for that escape door,
I want out of this torture,
I want to be free of this pain,
I wish someone would care,
Nobody's ever there,
When I'm falling down,
Nobody's picking me up,
So how can I keep holding on,
If I don't have a grip
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Unwanted Truth

Contributed by dirtyfool on Tuesday, 11th May 2004 @ 05:45:03 PM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

UNWANTED TRUTH
I always thought it,
And wished it a lie,
I always said it,
Never ment it,
But I have seen
What your actions mean,
No one wants me here,
With every tear,
That crashes to the floor,
I'm heading for that escape door,
I want out of this torture,
I want to be free of this pain,
I wish someone would care,
Nobody's ever there,
When I'm falling down,
Nobody's picking me up,
So how can I keep holding on,
If I don't have a grip

Copyright © dirtyfool ... [ 2004-05-11 17:45:03]
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Re: Unwanted Truth (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 11th May 2004 @ 05:46:53 PM AEST
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I have felt like this many many times... though I still haven't found that escape door...

Very good, and thanks for sharing...

Jaime

Re: Unwanted Truth (User Rating: 1 )
by angel_facing_judgement on Tuesday, 11th May 2004 @ 05:56:46 PM AEST
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been there

Re: Unwanted Truth (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 11th May 2004 @ 05:58:02 PM AEST
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Here is a hand, grab it!! We all feel alone and desperate at times. Hope things improve for you soon.

Rita

Re: Unwanted Truth (User Rating: 1 )
by valek on Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 11:47:45 AM AEST
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i know exactly how you feel man. feeliing that way really freakin suck doesnt it? awesome poem by the way. i really enjoyed it

peace,
Valek

Re: Unwanted Truth (User Rating: 1 )
by valek on Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 11:48:00 AM AEST
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i know exactly how you feel man. feeling that way really freakin sucks doesnt it? awesome poem by the way. i really enjoyed it

peace,
Valek

Re: Unwanted Truth (User Rating: 1 )
by movax on Saturday, 15th May 2004 @ 07:43:07 AM AEST
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Good stuff. Keep it up

Re: Unwanted Truth (User Rating: 1 )
by kidpoet_213 on Saturday, 22nd May 2004 @ 09:17:31 PM AEST
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Yepperz!!!
Been there and done this too... hey... u'll get thru... takes time and patiences... just grab onto something or someone and hold on tight... but don't drown them too... work as a team to get thru this ruff time..
By the way awesome poem... keep writing... now there's something to grab on to...
~Donna~

Re: Unwanted Truth (User Rating: 1 )
by Rhei76 on Tuesday, 6th July 2004 @ 01:30:13 PM AEST
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I thought it was a kick *** write. I felt my buzz kick in ti your words. Great poem.

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