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Make rounded jewels on my skin.
More collects, turning crimson.
And that’s where it all begins…

It over flows silently.
I watch it come down my arm.
With streams of liquid crimson.
And red anger, so I won’t feel calm.

Then the flames start to break out!
And everything starts to spin.
And forgotten pain rises from my soul.
Then is sucked back in.

Around my dark slashes,
Red circles come.
I cry in silence,
My heart thudding like a drum.

I wipe my wounds with tissue.
I cry with pleasure and pain.
I promise my-self it’s the last time.
But then I go and do it again…

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Self-Slicing Through Crimson Layers.

Contributed by deathdrop on Tuesday, 11th May 2004 @ 08:10:29 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Acid red drops,
Make rounded jewels on my skin.
More collects, turning crimson.
And that’s where it all begins…

It over flows silently.
I watch it come down my arm.
With streams of liquid crimson.
And red anger, so I won’t feel calm.

Then the flames start to break out!
And everything starts to spin.
And forgotten pain rises from my soul.
Then is sucked back in.

Around my dark slashes,
Red circles come.
I cry in silence,
My heart thudding like a drum.

I wipe my wounds with tissue.
I cry with pleasure and pain.
I promise my-self it’s the last time.
But then I go and do it again…

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Re: Self-Slicing Through Crimson Layers. (User Rating: 1 )
by Hurretje on Tuesday, 11th May 2004 @ 08:19:12 AM AEST
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It's all so dark..I hope you'll be able to find some light in there...
Greetz,
Hur

Re: Self-Slicing Through Crimson Layers. (User Rating: 1 )
by loopylou on Tuesday, 11th May 2004 @ 08:35:53 AM AEST
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tjis is very dark and desprate it left a effect after reading it. i suppose thats sad but it means your a good poet if you can make your poems so powerfull that people really feel them. i hope you move on from this stage and wish you luck.

Re: Self-Slicing Through Crimson Layers. (User Rating: 1 )
by bluoreo on Tuesday, 11th May 2004 @ 08:42:44 AM AEST
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This is a very strong poem. I''ve been there once. I hope things change for you. Take care.
-eric

Re: Self-Slicing Through Crimson Layers. (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Tuesday, 11th May 2004 @ 09:14:27 AM AEST
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this is so dark and sad I hope things get better for you real soon. If you ever need to talk Im here.

Michelle

Re: Self-Slicing Through Crimson Layers. (User Rating: 1 )
by LiquidChaos on Tuesday, 11th May 2004 @ 10:29:56 AM AEST
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god i know how that goes...hey don't worry about upsetting me. i write stuff just as dark. poetry is a way to vent. and i know im on edge cause i havnt cut in 4 weeks, but it's ok. i'll get through it. just hang in there hun.

great poem!

addie

Re: Self-Slicing Through Crimson Layers. (User Rating: 1 )
by kailadragon on Tuesday, 11th May 2004 @ 01:27:21 PM AEST
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wow...............i know the feeling. I'm a cutter. I know I need to quit, but i don'e have any other way to deal with the pain....

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